A rough draft animation I created in one week so it's no where near complete, it' a concept advert for a client who asked me to come up with something 'creative', hope I did lol.

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WATCH HERE:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvA6NpHmi4w

I like the style of animation a lot. But for a TV advert it doesn't work in my opinion. The shots drag way too long and don't tell us anything about the 'product'. It doesn't look or sound like a TV ad at all.

You'll benefit from going onto the same Youtube and watching 'real' ads... see how much they put into 30sec & 60sec ads. Note the way they 'build' up the product and to the product.

Best of luck with it all.

VillageBoi:
I like the style of animation a lot. But for a TV advert it doesn't work in my opinion. The shots drag way too long and don't tell us anything about the 'product'. It doesn't look or sound like a TV ad at all.

You'll benefit from going onto the same Youtube and watching 'real' ads... see how much they put into 30sec & 60sec ads. Note the way they 'build' up the product and to the product.

Best of luck with it all.

Lol, you NEVER like my concept...j/k...you're actually right, this was just to show what I could do with animation, the client will eventually give me an original concept with audio to use for the final...

Salmoneus:
Lol, you NEVER like my concept...j/k...you're actually right, this was just to show what I could do with animation, the client will eventually give me an original concept with audio to use for the final...

Don't get me wrong... I DO like your animations. Because you've said it's an 'Ad' I have to look at it as an ad... I know you get me. How you dey anyway?