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Review This Poem:fools Indeed by nonso3k(m): 11:56am On Jun 25, 2008 |
THEY CAME AND TOOK US AWAY BUT WHO WAS HE WHO LED US ASTRAY? FOR WHEN A MAN LEAVES HIS CULTURE HE BECOMES LIKE A VULTURE WHEN A MAN ABADONS HIS GODS THE GOD OF HIS FOREFATHERS AND CALL THEM FOOLS HE HIMSELF IS THE WORST FOOL FOR A FOOL BEGETS NOTHING BUT A FOOL FOR HE GROWS IN THE KNOWLEGE OF HIS FATHER HE CALLS THEM "MERE WOODS"BUT WHAT DOES HE BELIEVE IN? EMPTY HEAVENS? IT TAKES THE WISE BUT A LITTLE TIME TO LEARN BUT THE FOOL REMAINS BLIND TILL DEATH HE THINKS HIMSELF THE WISEST WHILE HE WALLOWS IN FOLLY HE ASKS WHERE THE GODS NOT AROUND WHEN THEY BOUND AND TOOK US AWAY BUT HE NEVER ASKS "WHAT HAVE WE DONE TO DESERVE THIS" THE TRUTH LIES WITHIN HIS REACH BUT HE WONT EVER GRAB IT WHY? CAUSE THE TRUTH IS HIS WORST ENEMY HE DETESTS TRUTH LIKE DEATH HE BELIEVES IN A FOREIGN CULTURE AND BOWS TO A FORIEGN GOD YET WHEN ONE OF HIS FAMILIES DIES HE BURIES HIM IN THE WAY OF HIS FORFATHERS HA! FOOLS INDEED ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by TrueBrit: 5:49pm On Jun 25, 2008 |
For Pete's sake, there is a Poem section for all poetry. |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by nonso3k(m): 9:54am On Jun 27, 2008 |
sorry lol just that they aoint got people thier |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by princesa(f): 7:01pm On Jun 27, 2008 |
the poem is nice, but i thought you started it with rhymes why didnt you continue maybe next time if you cant cope with rhyming, you should go for free verse the poems talks about hyprocrites and i enjoyed it |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by taju4ac(m): 7:45pm On Jun 27, 2008 |
Really Impressive please keep it up! infact i think soyinka & Okri ought to give you their Nobel & Booker. You really deserve it. Keep it up Tajudeen Amusa from Minna, Niger-State. |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by gorociano: 10:57am On Jul 04, 2008 |
Good, U are definitely on the right course, not only to fame, awards and fortune for being a good poet, but also for being what europeans in their self-sanctimonious nature will term, being a pagan |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by nonso3k(m): 9:56am On Jul 24, 2008 |
thx u all for ur review am really dumbfounded.tx |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by nonso3k(m): 10:00am On Jul 24, 2008 |
thx u all for ur review am really dumbfounded.tx. hello prinseca |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by princesa(f): 6:21pm On Jul 24, 2008 |
hi nonso |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by nonso3k(m): 2:17pm On Jul 28, 2008 |
culd u mail me ur profile never seem 2 catch u online,,,,,,,,princesa |
Re: Review This Poem:fools Indeed by princesa(f): 2:55pm On Jul 30, 2008 |
my profile is available in nairaland which other one are you asking for |
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