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Deadline : Sunday 6th October 2013, 6pm.

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deli dimes: Check

When are we posting?

Where are your bars?

my bars are ready dont fink lunatic is serious bout dis bout...jes waiting for him to holler wen he wanna post

deli dimes: my bars are ready dont fink lunatic is serious bout dis bout...jes waiting for him to holler wen he wanna post

Dude, Post My Bars are ready!

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Diss @Deli Luis Dimes

I'm spliting 'dime in half'/
. . . . Keep the remaining 'five cents' infact/ its not 'portuguese football' but I'll
. . . . . . quickly 'comot luis here' like am Substituting 'Figo in this match'!!/

This Bloke's Fooled/
. . .To think he brings killer. . . .flows too/
Cuz I'll wreck deli's. . . . . . whole crew/
. . . . . . buh first watch me 'drop dimes' then. . . 'head to my ear'. . . . . like im at the phone booth !!../


The crowd 'Dancing to my tune' as I'm spilling his blood/
. . . . .He a 'ruminant animal' mixed in his thoughts/
Hence I'll 'stuff his mouth with' music notes'
. . . . . So as to have him chewing the chord!!/

I'm refined and intact/
. . . . . .To spill dimes with gats/
He packed with old stuffs that wither/
. . . .Cuz we dont see a 'New Deli' like blind men in india!!/(New Dehli)

I put a 'mac' in the roach a$$/
For thinking he got the 'look' to toast gals/
Hence I ad-'journ' the case with a holster/
Then leave him behind the 'act' like romans!/(mark,Luke,John,Act,Romans) ^^

He knows this. . . . . crazed bad rapper iller/
Cuz I come with . . . . blades that batter weak lads/
Therefore. . . state this murder as 'animal invasion' when my troops attack with . . . . . .'cranes and caterpillars'!!/


This Geezer lacks the build up and Good fillers yo/
He bores the crowd when he raps though/
So. . . . . . My 'll army charge at the sucker to show he aint in a 'Free town' except he moves to
. . . . . sierra leone!!/

The way I choke emcees. . . . with bold textings/
. . . . . . . . . . . . Shows this bloke fears me/
cos this beating gives him a
. . . . . . 'lesson of life'
just like the 'old hermit'!!!/


I Just added to His Bitterness/
. . . . He aint escaping this In tha end//
Cos I just 'punched DL' and I.. . . . . aint
. . . . . . . . . surfing the Internet!!!/ (DL-Download-- Deli Luis)

abeg gimme till tomao to post am not @home tot i wrote in dis fone wit me...went out wit my second fone n i will be spending d nyt dere biko no vex sowi 4 d inconvenience

deli dimes: abeg gimme till tomao to post am not @home tot i wrote in dis fone wit me...went out wit my second fone n i will be spending d nyt dere biko no vex sowi 4 d inconvenience

Dude? Seriously? Smh

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Dude? Seriously? Smh

no vex...if i cannt go home by 6:30am will keystyle a verse 4 u no vex biko

Closed : Lunatic wins.