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On nairaland, this is my first thread,
im shy, im hiding, im really scared,
does it hurt, or is smooth like when i shaved my first beard,
i didnt want to write here, but i was encouraged by hermos and lucentbeauty when my emotions i shared,
i hope the moderator arent unkind like sexkills, i heard he is weird.

I chose a topic and romance it was,
wen it comes to love i fall in trance, that, i dnt knw d cause,
its funny, a man and woman form an alliance, for better or worse,
life isnt certain, its by chance we become the boss,
but he pledges his tomoro for her, wat can make him do such? Love does,
i hope i dnt fall into such an instance, worse still with one of those whores!

Drop urs... This is ma first topic on NL

This is really nice, I wish I could write like that

Nice one!

Fine one bro. liked the poetic nature of your language.

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Thanks y'all...

So proud of you

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Woju Woju Woju Woju Woju

Lucentbeauty: So proud of you

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Woju Woju Woju Woju Woju

tnx dear... U made me do dis!

GenWOJUOLA: tnx dear... U made me do dis!

No,we only encouraged you,you took the step and am glad you did.

Following...

Eh?

Nigeria

a land that flowed with milk and honey,
but now flows with corruption theft and armed robbery,
a land that once thrived on honesty, love and purity,
is now evil, badly stained with wrongs, especially blood money,
justice has been swept away, the rich now own the judiciary,
the masses, ye, the poor masses no longer have faith in the jury,
why Nigeria? Why invite Gods furry?
Why to destruction do yu have to run in a hurry?
Why did yu exchange a bright future for one this blurry?
Why Nigeria cant u hold a parley,
PDP, APC, APGA, tinubu, buhari, okorocha and LP,
just try it, invite every other political party,
put aside personal interest, dnt ignore aliyu or Amaechi,
it could be every other d1ck tom and harry,
but rebuilding Nigeria is a must,
it wat we must pay not regarding the cost,
im taking the first step forward, aw abt u?
Hope u arent a coward?

Shes ma gurl, she ma pride,
i may b tough, but she makes me mild,
her smiles, just like a child,
her walk, majestic, like d gurls guild,
her innocence, damn, drives me wild!

shes pretty, no doubt,
her beauty, one of a kind,
i noticed her on d 7th boulevard,
her eyes, met me off guard,
for her name i asked,
and princess louissana she answered;
one of a kind, i reverberated!
Permit me to c u again, i requested.

A date, i was initiating,
dere was a guy, unfortunately, she was dating,
but her voice, to me, was intoxicatin,
so my love to her, i was insisting!

her lips tasted like paradise,
her hair, smelled so nice,
makin her mine wasnt wise,
cos i had just displaced a brother, or better still, made him my vice!

rhyming,u rap or sing?

Your topic I saw and I opened with a click,
From line to line I read the words of your ink,
I smiled to myself as I paused to think,
Remembering the days I did same with my bic...

It all started that night in a class,
When my lecturer shot at me with darts of maths,
I learnt as I sat -
Hoping to under-stand
But no! My mind wandered away from the class...

It was out in space in search of words to rhyme with,
Here, there, and there searched it,
Gradually the words did flow in bits,
Then on I went as I made my first piece...

Writing and rhyming I'll always love with my all,
Writing and rhyming are the colors of my world,
Oh! My writing, my rhyming, my all,
These I shall do even in the world to come...

Nicely done...

/Following with all interest/....

I may not b a wordsmith,
i may not make a music beat,
i may not on the alter sit,
or have the shiniest white teeth.

She may not ring the church bell,
she may not b d finest girl,
she may not b a good sell
or b d model for my new jell.

But love is wild and blind,
twistin two bodies, heart and mind,
of different nature, type and kind,
makin dem realize the treasure they'd find

Lucentbeauty: rhyming,u rap or sing?

none.. I just think abt her and d inspiration comes!! Aldoe, always been good with them rhymes..

@ tony... Im honestly amazed,
yur poems my eyes have stuck to gaze,
yur path, my feet have chose as ways,
yur rhymes, evidence dat literacy pays!! Cool lines dude!