this is also for the brothers, the lazy ones who can not be bothered with there duties at home, it is time to give us ladies a reason to submit (this is not about sex) although some may think so.



Mr black man touch me
with your magic stick
so that i will submit

claim back you position
as it was told because
you see as a black woman
i was to bold.

COCO29:

Mr black man touch me
with your magic stick
so that i will submit

claim back you position
as it was told
because you see as a black woman
i was to bold.

this is simple, got an indifferent emotion to it and passes across a clear message without having the readers thinking too much.

quite lovely, i must say.

do u work with rhyming schemes?

not allways, but i prefer to and it is not as easy as people think to to rhyme in poetry and still make sense

let me go grab some chinese, i will be back and i will turn dat poem to rhyme. gimme like 20mins. i will be logged off nl while im gon.

to rhyme aint easy but if u can do it, it makes the poem easy to memorize and recall.

COCO29:


Mr black man touch me
with your magic stick
so that i will submit

claim back you position
as it was told because
you see as a black woman
i was to bold.

i tried ryhming it up, but i cudnt do it. so basically dis poem has a blank verse.

it is open, i do not feel i need to tell men any thing more, i am very Strong headed and independent just like my poems, some times you may think that words are missing, but that is just how i want it to be, i want to leave the reader thinking about what happen after the poem is finished i want them to finish it according to their lives.


ya feel me

yep, i feel year.

good tactics. love it.