omotalkie: All I can say is wow wow wow! I can't believe I stayed all thru d nyt reading dis amazing piece. I got to knw bout ur story from d voting thread & had to search ur story, & I tank God it was worth it all. Uve rily made ma day, tnx gurl and may God increase u wit knowledge to write more

Rily? Hpe say u no get headache. I'm glad. Tanx dear. Amen o!

stormybucci: thinking of ur early comenters b4 Moi?? i don vex, no beg me ooo cus vex don enter cloud 9

Lmao! Wat if my apology dey cloud 10?

Fatalveli: Man Bleep dis bitch ass niggas, hw ya'll doing, I'm lil tune.... Congrats sis

Hmmm....tanx dear

ifynwa15: Audrey luv, Oliver twist is still here oooo, more updates plsssssss

Yes dear. Am abt 2 update

Hameenat94: God pls make Oleng happy.. Let all this tears dnt go 4 nothing... I pity her xo much!

Amen o! Me 2. Its amazing hw a single mistake can ruin ur lyf. Tanx dear

Cheriepet:

Dont worry much if him no tell u i will do d honours.... but let me first take permission b4 dey decide to starve me

Okay. I dey wait o!

PrinceAdepoju: ...that strange feeling


that EricOleng will find their first child.

He will be discovered 'cos of the Eric face he has.

*just thinking aloud though.*

Hmm....Bros Prince, dis ur thinking out loud na wit loud speakers o! Let's kip our fingers crossed. Dts if we r nt all on a wide goose chase. Words mite hv intentionally bin written jst 2 get pple tinkin in anoda direction.

Cheriepet: I think it is high time Oleng stops crying n starts taking action... crying solves nothing... so she should take steps to finding out what really happened n try to come in terms with everything n everybody

My dear, Eric is bck so I dnt think her heart will communicate 2 her tear ducts anymore to inform it dt she's unhapi.

Okinjay: Auuuuuddddddrrreeeeyyyyy.....You too gbaski

Tanx dear

Audrey Timms come and update nau, u want me to faint? btw congrat, it was a well deserved price.

stormybucci: u no fit think 4 ur mind?? i was thinking abt dat also buh nt aloud, abeg no make noise again

Lol! U get award 4 finding trouble

Funniez: More updates o, Audrey even though I walk 2ru d valley of d shadow of low battery, I shal not go offline 4 thou updates is comin, ur story nd ur updates, they comfort me. U prepared a wondaful story 4 me in the website of nairaland, u annoint my mind with pity {for Oleng}, surely, gud network nd mb shal folow me, all to d end of dis story nd I shal dwel on nairaland 4eva nd eva. Amen. Na joke o

Lol! Let me concur wit an amen. Amen!

bussyzionite: Audrey dear, biko we dey wait for d next update and make am very longggggggggggggggggggggggggggg........
May your anointing for inspiration never run dry

I'm abt 2. I'll try my best

typompy234: Audrey Timms come and update nau, u want me to faint? btw congrat, it was a well deserved price.

Am abt 2. Tanx dear

Praises flowing in from all corners....you deserve it ma'am, even the regular updater of the month ...waiting for another sumptuous update, the previous one wanted to connect my tear duct with my brain, but I didn't cry because I'm a man.

*Removed*

dammygoody: Praises flowing in from all corners....you deserve it ma'am, even the regular updater of the month ...waiting for another sumptuous update, the previous one wanted to connect my tear duct with my brain, but I didn't cry because I'm a man.

Ur comment made me laugh real gud jst now; tear duct and brain connection. I read sumwre dt it takes a real man 2 cry. Tanx dear

Guys, I'm gonna try 2 update one last tym 2day. Frm den onwards it MIGHT be only mornings and evenings because my leave ends 2day. Work resumes tmro (I wan cry ehn!). I must say dis ws d best leave ever. U guys made it enjoyable. D story is gradually coming to an end. Its being wonderful having u guys all d way. I appreciate u all.

Soo if he now dies what shuld now happen? mtchhw #teamoyinboeric

AudreyTimms:
Rily? Hpe say u no get headache. I'm glad. Tanx dear. Amen o!

Yeah rily! I gat headache ooh buh some pills did d magic

Okay I don't like commenting on stories so as not to. Make the writers head to swell. Buh I have justone request.

Audrey please come and spend a nite @ my place. Then u can tell me n cheriepet the remainder of this story.

Audrey has done it again... wasnt expecting that, Now Dave will die, Eric and oleng . patiently waiting for evenings update.

Na d whole sickness wey dey dis world dat dave get? Hope he no get ebola o, make he no go infect my gal oleng. Make he die sef comot 4 d picture....mtscheeeeew

Tanx so much 4 d update Audrey Timms,u rock .Even as u'll resume wrk 2moro I wish u a grt day @ wrk.

Make hin die sef mchew!!!!

Let me start by congratulating Audrey, u deserve it. More and more Increase to ur imagination!

Back to the storey, i kind of feel sad for dave, dats y in life, it is not gud to manipulate tings, u see where it got him? Sick and alone.
Oleng should go for what her heart has been telling her jor.

AudreyTimms:
Lol! Who? Abeg whisper am 2 me

That angel over there *points at charijee*

Cheriepet:

I believe i know d ONE

Hehehehehe

typompy234: Audrey has done it again... wasnt expecting that, Now Dave will die, Eric and oleng . patiently waiting for evenings update.

Balley: Na d whole sickness wey dey dis world dat dave get? Hope he no get ebola o, make he no go infect my gal oleng. Make he die sef comot 4 d picture....mtscheeeeew

JeffreyJamez: Make hin die sef mchew!!!!

With all the above bolded, I believe Dave is dead already...

Sterility... Nw Leukemia... Na wa oh... Make e die so dat all d pains go stop abeg... Oleng shuld better fight 4 her sunshine nd happiness buh Aunty Vien shuld tell her d secret she's hiding 4rm her pls.. Weldone Audrey... I cn really take my mind off dis story... I even dreamt abt it

Oliver Twist is here again. Please the competition of regular updater of the month has begun. Please kindly go and vote for our dear AudreyTimms again. She has really tried. She updates everyday even through flu attack. Sometimes even up to three times a day. Gifts can't be too much if the person deserves it. Please let's join hands together again to vote her to victory.

AudreyTimms:
Lmao! Wat if my apology dey cloud 10?

i would accept d apology if u allow me take u 2 d cloud10 xxxualy #nohomo