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POEM: I Feel Lonely In This Crowded World by Nobody: 9:19am On Oct 11, 2014
/* Hey guys, during the week i kicked off a poem blog (probably the 1st poem blog in Nigeria): http://thatonepoem..com . I'm inviting all poets and poem lovers to visit the site and lets join hands together and build it. Feel free to contact me via the email on the blog if you'd like to feature your poem. */

*I feel lonely in this crowded world*

I was lonely in this crowded world.
Life battered me during the day,
While at night, i had no shelter.
No one gave me attention,
Those who cared to, treated me as trash.
I felt rejected and my heart bled.
God has forsaken me, I thought.
But one day i met someone who i called my friend.
Oh atlast i found a shoulder to cry on,
I found someone who will confront life with me.
I found a companion.
Everything was fine but distance separated us.
Still i pledged never to let go.
But then a shadow in my past came hunting.
I craved for more attention.
And unknowingly i ruined our friendship.
I am a sinner for i hurt my only friend,
Someone who filled a void in my life.
Oh God why was i careless?
I am deeply sorry but who will listen!
What went wrong, i know and i've dealt with it.
I love my friend dearly but my friend no longer believes that.
I beg for another chance but really do i deserve it?
For I hurt my dearest friend, my companion.
I doubt if my friend still sees me as a friend,
So now, i feel lonely in this crowded world.

*****

In this poem, i actually poured out my heart on how i felt after i hurt a very dear friend.

Have you ever hurt your friend and you feel so bad, so lonely because you are not sure if they still love you? I'd like to hear about it! Use the comment section.

http://thatonepoem..com/2014/10/i-feel-lonely-in-this-crowded-world.html
Re: POEM: I Feel Lonely In This Crowded World by Ashley2389: 12:17pm On Oct 11, 2014
This is my story
A plane mirror indeed
Right, I tried to make it
But too late, it was
I see myself in ur words
That is my story

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