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| Is It In Me Or Not??... My First Scribble.......just For D "Drugs" by lyrical(m): 11:51am On Oct 11, 2014 |
aftet reading some of d mind blowing lines i saw here on NL...i just scribbled dis lines within 30mins (twas brain straining kindof..... buh i enjoyed it)... i pray d dopeheads.....to advice me based on dese few lines..... if i shud continue/quit it... ah go----- game set on "vinci code", am privileged to "the cypher"(decipher)/ these emcees too lame,i give d legs dae desire/ first tym i tryna "bust n rhymes"(busta rhymes),i pray to be on "stars" invitation/ kneeling not to die n leave my "pulse" station/ my pocket lyk d runway...cos dats where "nairaland"/swear am hot...ah giv em niggas "blackburns",cos wen ah spit..same niggas shout "sun dey land"(sunderland)..two negroes dat cn never take d lead in competitions or even "football leagues"....... i strike "hotshots" lyk am a "big brother" to carlos...... leave d "goalie wound"..no entertainment in ghana/ revealing till i tap d genesis..no chorus...jus verse/ n dats drakes starting from d bottom to d top....holybook in reverse/ pucci....money...weed...weezy's favourites/mk me wonder if dude knew jeezy's of nazareth/ they claim to be on top of d building.....ro ofing sheets/what u niggies ate?..u dropping stinking shits/..i got "strong hairs"...i need to "relax"/plus i got to "keep my time" authentic "rolex"/ still "catholic"...yet to be a "winner"/confessing to Nlanders....am a sinner/ i ask for two things "weed n boys"(we dem boiz) pr ama leave here/ aint referencing d hitsong from wiz "khalifa"/ i rep S.T.U.P.O(smoke till u pass out)/ n nw my brains are S.T.U.B.O(so terribly under black out)...... braaaaaaaaaaaaaah.......... aint even organised.... dnt even know hw many bars..... hv alot to learn.... judge me as a newbie......bikokwa |
| Re: Is It In Me Or Not??... My First Scribble.......just For D "Drugs" by kr0ne(m): 12:54pm On Oct 11, 2014 |
lyrical:You should start dropping ur verses in FFR, not here. Meanwhile, try arranging ur lines, bar by bar. I can't even tell the number of lines/bars u have here. Again, u suck at rhyming. At the end of every line make sure u have, at least, two-syllable rhymes. I won't say anything about ur wordplay, but they're so corny and unwanted. I must confess that I see the zeal in u though. Game up! |
| Re: Is It In Me Or Not??... My First Scribble.......just For D "Drugs" by lyrical(m): 1:56pm On Oct 11, 2014 |
fank dude......... i get it........ 1 Like |
| Re: Is It In Me Or Not??... My First Scribble.......just For D "Drugs" by Testerfuze(m): 8:28pm On Oct 11, 2014 |
Its NT like you're dat bad....bt you surely need more polishing and alotta practise,your rhymes is something you should pay attention to and Maybe we can start 4rm there |
| Re: Is It In Me Or Not??... My First Scribble.......just For D "Drugs" by lyrical(m): 9:40am On Oct 12, 2014 |
testerfuze............ fankx......i get ur pwoint.......working on it....... |
| Re: Is It In Me Or Not??... My First Scribble.......just For D "Drugs" by ELYMAXiimus(m): 8:45am On Oct 24, 2014 |
Sun dey land/ sunderland... Lwkmd..... Warriblood is that you? |
| Re: Is It In Me Or Not??... My First Scribble.......just For D "Drugs" by YoungDaNaval(m): 10:40am On Oct 24, 2014 |
ELYMAXiimus:lol |
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