wow dats some heavy lines u dropped there,so wen u gonna finish da story tho.nice one luv.

Nah man don't be like dat complete d story pls,u av 2 complete it cus it kept me glued 2 my chair needed 2 take a wee but ignored it 4 ur story so pls u gat 2 finish wot u started bro.but dat those two were da bomb man 4 shizzle.

Seun i like the site. I just joined a few minutes ago and i've been glued to my seat. The story is good. You definitely got yourself a talent.Write a full story line and take it to the National Theatre. They could be impressed enough to make it a soap opera like everyday people or something. I don't live in Nigeria but the advise is from Omotola Jalade Ekehinde.

I've posted what might be a more interesting story for you guys:
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-21118.0.html

Hope this makes up for the lack of progress on this story!

Seun:

I've posted what might be a more interesting story for you guys:
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-21118.0.html

Hope this makes up for the lack of progress on this story!

why dont u continue?

I don't want to post a substandard continuation to the story. Can I supply the plot summary?

No, Seun, that is not allowed. Finish the story, or I go, hmmm, make I no talk.

Just complete the story, when you have the time. Also no forget wetin Tinard said o. You might just land yourself a job, has a script writer.

I'm flattered. I know that practice makes perfect, but I'm not aiming to become a professional writer.

The most important thing in becoming a successful writer is to acquire the knowledge of your language.

If your English is not good, don't even attempt to write in the English language until you have studied and acquired the basic knowledge of English grammar and learn all the Literary Terms first http://www.virtualsalt.com/litterms.htm.

I use different literary terms in all my writings even in forums like on Nairaland. And if you don't take your time to read in-between the lines you will even misunderstand the posts.

Seun can write well if he wants to. Because he understands the English language.
Once you understand the English language, you can write any genre of literature without stress.

This was a pretty good one. And I abandoned it. Probably shouldn't have.

Excellent story . captivating . .Please continue .

Seun, this isn't bad at all. Great story. It seems somewhere between a novel and a play. If it's a play, you need to add more "props" to it.

Actually, it reads like those radio plays my dad used to force us to listen to from the BBC back in the days. Cool stuff man, good quality.

Moved to new story review forum