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LogoDWhiz: she's not desperate.. Its just the way segun is treating her...

Nooo Logo right from the onset Jummy has been desperate so far

D9ty7: Good morning guys, this is an early morning update. The next updates will be later in the day because am kind of fixed up for today. But i promise you at least two more updates today.
While am away lets delibrate on this questions.
1. Now that Segun have bleeped Jummy. Does that make their love stronger? Are they even in love?
2. What do you think will be the content of Nike's message?
3. Based on acceptance. Who do you think Mary will prefer between Jummy and Nike if Segun succeeded in dating her?(Nike)
Give your answers with reasons.
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Lets kip the thread busy before the next update.
Signed:
d9ty7.

(1)It won't make their love stronge
(2)Probably conditions before she would accept
(3)Mary would definitely like Jummy more cos she doesn't really know anything about nike

D9ty7: I get u perfectly. Based on d tushness of the family, i had to make it easier for my readers to understand my story.
Concerning the humor, sarcasm, nd d unrealistic plot. Am not a writer, am just doing this to while away time.
I guess you don't live in Ibadan, cos if u do, you will know what Secondary school cultist entails.
Anyways, i appreciate your observations. It will definitely make me a better writer.

Very mature response thumbs up bro

sambrozini: Diz story looks childish to me
Cox dz days, teenagers don't du dz fuvk that you're writing

I tell you they do,I deal with them like everyday

Haybeeb: but segun sef na cassanova o..only segun olanike, jummy, titilope, tolani...#SMH

The guy na "hot boy"

D9ty7: --continuation--
After the paper Segun waited for Jummy outside the exam hall.
Nike hurriedly came out and walked towards Segun. She handed him an envelope and waited for his reaction. Segun opened it and discovered it was an invitation card to her birthday party on the 4th of October.
"Will you come?" She asked.
"Yes, i will." he replied.
"I'll really appreciate it." she said.
Jummy came outside and joined them.
"Baby let's go." she said.
"I'll be with you shortly." he said.
"See you later." she said.
"Alright." Segun said and walked to where Jummy was standing.
"What's that?" Jummy asked.
"Invitation card." he replied.
"For what?" she asked.
"Birthday party." he replied.
"do u plan on attending?"
"Yes, i will." segun answered.
"But what is so special in that girl." Jummy asked.
"There is nothing special in her, She is my friend and i have to support her on her birthday."
"Let go on a date on that day." Jummy said.
"No problem, provided you'll follow me to her birthday." he said.
"No way, am i going to her birthday." she replied.
"Then we go on no date." he said.
"I know you love that girl." she said angrily.
Segun was suprised at her sudden outburst. Jummy walked away angrily, leaving Segun behind. Segun didn't bother going after her.
"Segun, what's the matter?" Nike asked from behind.
"Nothing. Its just a little misunderstanding." segun replied.
"Hope its not about my invitation. Because i can hear you talk about going somewhere." She said.
"Its not about your invitation." segun said.
They continued walking towards the main road.
"So, how was your paper?" segun asked expertly changing the topic.
"It was good." she replied.
They got to the bus-stop where they will go their seperate ways.
"See you tomorrow." she said.
"yeah, Biology practicals right?" he asked.
"Yes."
Segun hopped into a commercial bus and Nike crossed the road.
"Oh my God! See maturity. She didn't feel jealous at all." he said to himself.

--to be continued--

I've been reading silently for so long, but I must confess bro that you are really good at this. Thumbs up (y)