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Front sit booked

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Fatalveli:
This is my second story on NL, I'm not a writer and neither I'm I aspiring to be, but I was inspired by some great writers on NL and I'm suddenly feeling the urge to write.
Correction, comments and critics are highly welcomed! Thanks.



Note: No part of this work should be copied by any means without the copywrite owners prior notice.

I'm inviting these people's to the Vip section: they are the embodiment of literature.

Queenxstar(f), SammyHoe(m),
D9ty7(m), ), Royver(m), daveP(m), Divepen(m), JigsawKillah(m), AudreyTimms(f),
PrettySpicey(f), Therock5555(m), kayemjay
(m), LarrySun(m), Ishilove, Dygeasy(m), safarigirl(f),
vonn(f), princesa(f), , TemitopeDaniel(m), KingzPen
(m), handie(m) OMA4U(m)

I'm also inviting:

Onemansquad(m)JeffreyJamez(mLogoDWhiz(m), Bluestarry(m) onihaxy,
Seun(m), Jennimma(f), Fembleez1(m)Hameenat94(f), stuff(m), mention(m), sirnoel(m), labaski(f), and so on. U guys rock.

Awww....... I'm so honoured dear...
Thanks a lot. Definitely following!

Fatalveli:
This is my second story on NL, I'm not a writer and neither I'm I aspiring to be, but I was inspired by some great writers on NL and I'm suddenly feeling the urge to write.
Correction, comments and critics are highly welcomed! Thanks.



Note: No part of this work should be copied by any means without the copywrite owners prior notice.

I'm inviting these people's to the Vip section: they are the embodiment of literature.

Queenxstar(f), SammyHoe(m),
D9ty7(m), ), Royver(m), daveP(m), Divepen(m), JigsawKillah(m), AudreyTimms(f),
PrettySpicey(f), Therock5555(m), kayemjay
(m), LarrySun(m), Ishilove, Dygeasy(m), safarigirl(f),
vonn(f), princesa(f), , TemitopeDaniel(m), KingzPen
(m), handie(m) OMA4U(m)

I'm also inviting:

Onemansquad(m)JeffreyJamez(mLogoDWhiz(m), Bluestarry(m) onihaxy,
Seun(m), Jennimma(f), Fembleez1(m)Hameenat94(f), stuff(m), mention(m), sirnoel(m), labaski(f), and so on. U guys rock.

I'm honoured for the mention. I dey follow you from cananland here bro.

(stands at entrance) my holiday from this section isnt over yet. When it is, il bombard

cc:Jennimma

check spellings "like a madmen"

Fatalveli:
This is my second story on NL, I'm not a writer and neither I'm I aspiring to be, but I was inspired by some great writers on NL and I'm suddenly feeling the urge to write.
Correction, comments and critics are highly welcomed! Thanks.



Note: No part of this work should be copied by any means without the copywrite owners prior notice.

I'm inviting these people's to the Vip section: they are the embodiment of literature.

Queenxstar(f), SammyHoe(m),
D9ty7(m), ), Royver(m), daveP(m), Divepen(m), JigsawKillah(m), AudreyTimms(f),
PrettySpicey(f), Therock5555(m), kayemjay
(m), LarrySun(m), Ishilove, Dygeasy(m), safarigirl(f),
vonn(f), princesa(f), , TemitopeDaniel(m), KingzPen
(m), handie(m) OMA4U(m)

I'm also inviting:

Onemansquad(m)JeffreyJamez(mLogoDWhiz(m), Bluestarry(m) onihaxy,
Seun(m), Jennimma(f), Fembleez1(m)Hameenat94(f), stuff(m), mention(m), sirnoel(m), labaski(f), and so on. U guys rock.

thanks for d invitaton sweetie..i dey ur back all the way.. but u no invite tecno4life ooo..u know say na war..

IKJ66:
Front sit booked

u're wlcm bro

onihaxy:
I'm honoured for the mention. I dey follow you from cananland here bro.

tanx boss

labaski:
thanks for d invitaton sweetie..i dey ur back all the way.. but u no invite tecno4life ooo..u know say na war..

tanx dear, I don include him.... Abeg I no want war! Btw where is onemansquad

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I don show, front row things. Who's taking my order??

Thanks for the mention boss






Someone already pointed out "like a madmen",..............'Madmen' is plural and shouldn't take the article 'a'.


More power to your elbow bro

Check out this story. I just started it. It's very interesting.and you Fatal.........patiently waiting more umpdate....
https://www.nairaland.com/2036817/reasons-kill-novella#up

Check out this story. I just started it. It's very interesting.and you Fatal.........patiently waiting more umpdate....
https://www.nairaland.com/2036817/reasons-kill-novella#

#Present.

D9ty7:
#Present.

I sight u sire

Fatalveli:
I sight u sire

following.....

Tnks for d invitation. I'm here nd going no wia. Staying wit u till da end

So Fatalveli start story no mention me

Labaski dear thanks

Bluestarry:
following.....

wlcm bro

tecno4life:
So Fatalveli start story no mention me

Labaski dear thanks

I'm sorry bro, I thought I've included ur name

Hameenat94:
Tnks for d invitation. I'm here nd going no wia. Staying wit u till da end

I sight u ma, pls enjoy ur stay here

Hameenat94:
Tnks for d invitation. I'm here nd going no wia. Staying wit u till da end

I sight u ma, pls enjoy ur stay here



Kingphilip, nancydearie, smallpenis, logodwhiz: where are you guys

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Nice update *grab my bobo nd gala*

Fatalveli:
tanx dear, I don include him.... Abeg I no want war! Btw where is onemansquad

Bros ah sight u jare
#anti spam bot ban me 4 wetin i no knw oo na nw dm jst dy release me

9c work
#dy follow u till d end

Awww nice update

Trypa:
Awww nice update

tanx dear

Fatalveli:
I'm sorry bro, I thought I've included ur name

Okay

The man with an eagles tattoo
Leggo

Fatalveli:
I sight u ma, pls enjoy ur stay here



King philip, Nancy dearie, small pen is, logo dwhiz: where are you guys

since I wasn't invited just wanna stay put

BTW ur first update which contains this paragraph have a typo please correct

He quickly dived his head back in my room so as
not to fall victim of a stray bullet; a feeling of
uneasiness to over him, this was the first time he'd behold such a sight in his entire life and it was
terrifying.

I think it should b took