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Emerald'z Verses by Emeraldz(f): 4:34pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
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Re: Emerald'z Verses by Emeraldz(f): 4:54pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
AN IDEA My papa always speaks a tale About the rain and what it brings The wet drops touch all men It is pleasurable, refreshing and soothing Oh the blessing of the rain after a dry season. My papa tells of a kind of rain It falls from the sky but it is not wet These eurekaric drops can touch any man To change the world and shift the trends Oh the wonders of a unique rain. Now and then, the new rain falls on me The drops engulf me, showing a new side Papa says these unique raindrops are ideas The same ideas fall on different persons The hero who acts on it and the one who ignores it What will it be for you my child? The answer, I know, we are all guilty Sometimes, excited, we bask in and enjoy the rain Other times, too lazy, we fail to take delight Yet, I discover myself, the beauty of an idea and the thrill of a breakthrough. Eureka! |
Re: Emerald'z Verses by Emeraldz(f): 5:21pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
I haf do my assignment oh. Cc: Laykorn Cc: Texanomaly Cc: EverestdeBliu Cc: leki10 |
Re: Emerald'z Verses by Nobody: 5:24pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
Please remember to tag leki10. You're doing his assignment. But, let me do small amenbo. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Emerald'z Verses by Emeraldz(f): 6:04pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
laykorn: Feel free to do the amebo. I knew I just had to write something. Does this qualify as a free verse? |
Re: Emerald'z Verses by EverestdeBliu(m): 6:05pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
Emeraldz:Impressive! I like your mode and stream of consciousness. Your use of imagery is also cited... Let's improve on our use of words(diction),structures and let's try to employ some sort of poetic sounds (rhymes and rhythm).punctuation too. Over 10,I give you 5. |
Re: Emerald'z Verses by Nobody: 6:11pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
EverestdeBliu: |
Re: Emerald'z Verses by Emeraldz(f): 6:17pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
EverestdeBliu: Thank you. I will work on that. |
Re: Emerald'z Verses by Emeraldz(f): 6:20pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
Why is laykorn shining his eyes? |
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