BlissfulJeff:
nice one larry.

Thanks bro.

EkopSparoAyara:
Peter black..u've lost a great friend...What lust can do..

Lust is one of the most powerful weapons of the devil.

garex:
But stealing the necklace was a grave error that cost him a lot.


I might be wrong though, but I've the feeling that the woman Peter stole from is Mrs Salami...

We shall see.

EkopSparoAyara:
I want to bliv that the woman Peter lifted the necklace from does not have connection with John Balewa,else,it will mean doom for Black..

LOL! I can imagine.

GODSMILEFOREVER:
Am perceiving that the woman Black stole her gold chain is the female doctor ( Roda's mum)

We shall know soon enough.

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#100. I was here!

This update is a classic. Rhoda's Persona changed.. Black acting dumb all through the romp..

100th Page, I Was Here In Beyonce Voice,,
Thanks Mr Larrysun For This. God Bless You.

*but wait, it is the 101th page right? *

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By the time he returned, Rhoda had once again disappeared.


interesting. I love what I just read now. holding Peter to ransom is the best idea Rhoda could employ.
but who knows, Black Maria is a twisted and will always be an unpredictable story.

Larry if you no do dis rhoda something

me myself will do you something


so after everything, she still get mind thief the gold necklace. ..

chaii...women womeen womeeennnnn....

Circle of thieves

Which one is Bobby oyoyo?

Rhoda Gold disappeared with the gold necklace. Hahahahahaha

Rhoda had once again disappeared from the room,and the gold necklace had disappeared with her..

Oh boy..
Wtf
Larrysun,weldone.. Blackie's fate lies in your hands

LarrySun:
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Peter’s unresponsiveness didn’t stop Rhoda from taking it romance to the next level. She gently pushed him on his back and climbed on him. She didn’t have to shed her garment, she just hiked the gown up to her waist, drew the crotch of her panties aside, pulled his shorts down and led his bobbing yoyo into her damp tunnel. She took her time this time. She didn’t ride him roughly. She was making love this time; it wasn’t the usual hot sexual regatta they had always had in the past. Rhoda Gold was indeed a changed girl, and her method of lovemaking had changed with her. She climaxed in fifteen minutes and climbed off of him.

Peter stood up and went out to the bathroom to clean himself up. He didn’t say anything to her. By the time he returned, Rhoda had once again disappeared from the room, and the gold necklace had disappeared with her.

This paragraph is actually one of the best I've ever read. What a writer Larrysun is. Keep it up, bro.

#100.... I WAS HERE, AND STILL FOLLOWING

LarrySun:
LOL! Where are the similarities.

I am just asking you ooo cos I don't know.
Once again, is there any similarity?

respect to you larrysun

* when life hands us an emotional scissors, we have no choice but to start cutting irrevocably*

Hmm..

Nice one Mr. LARRY

U re 1 in a million,Mr Larrysun.D suspense z just 2 much with each update.Xpecting an update...

Once again , thanks for the update . May this book take you to places you never imagined in Jesus name . Amen




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I LUV DIS UPDATE

"and led his bobbing yoyo into her damp tunnel" Wehdone sir���

That necklace will surely be a huge problem

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Flashylily:
And I shed tears again

Happy Birthday to us

Nice update, more ink to ur pen

Rhoda again

Where did this creature Rhoda come from?? Why take the necklace? Is she now a thief too? A twist of suspence indeed.

LarrySun I been meaning to ask;
How old are you? Are you in your mid thirties or early forties? Or are you in your twenties?

Where did you study? Are you human? (though this is extreme but I have to ask still)

What inspired this story?
what inspired you to become a dedicated writer?

Mehn! I need to know honestly, cuz bro you are excellent.

Reading your story PARADOX OF ABEL and I'm like "God so much talent" I almost shed tears.

Thumb Up!

YoungDaNaval:
Which one is Bobby oyoyo?

Newly invented description 4 wooblee nta-ntaaa