Jbfranklin:
women are very greedy....they put their feelings before others....they put their selfish desires first...."Rhoda Gold" Is unaware of they Cost of a bloody friendship

Male Bonding is a very strong type of invisible bond, Stronger than "Ionic bonds"... breaking they bond brings forth sporadic volcanic eruption in a dormant instance very disastrous to parties involved.....
A friendship so strong women are unlikely they brain or vices behind it explosive and fearsome collapse.

I would gladly give up they woman I Love. Than to betray a "two headed true brother like friendship".

can relate to they situation on ground as a victim...still trying to overcome....
Women don't know they true meaning of friend-ship...
They prefer Relation-ship.

I commend you Mr LarrySun for creating in our mind through words a wonderful world , where we witness firsthand they plight of they less privileged...

I am an upcoming "Moving pictures(simply 'Movie')producer" from my speculations, with more detailed description of your work and a flowing suspense, stricken work,like they ongoing project...your write-ups would make it to they "Big Screen" More detailed they "Box Office"...
Am also A writer ...but not very Good with words...I like an eagle settle on writing scripts for scenes ...
I would try to write though knowing that It will just like a " Boa" swallow my Time , Money, and brain Glucose....

Master of Chemistry, I hail ooo.

what a story

Where arth thou o Larrysun?

me I started dis story 2016 ooo...den stopped nd come back 2017 now December we Neva even reach half way....
I like d story buh dis ....... oga sha

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Break into their house


Larry why

..Bobby wants to create another mistake again.

what is his problem with the necklace now, thanks Mr Larry for this,
awaits another ....

Maybe black is connected to the family somehow too

More ink to your pen larry ___following____

Nice update, more ink to your pen

Weldone bro, nice job you're doing here

I believe Mr Larrysun is back.I swear this is one hell of a story, that i must know how it end

This story ehh!!!

In reekado banks voice..Peter,easy oo jeje..take it slow oo..
Weldone Larrysun...
Nice write up..

what's his ish with the necklace ni? sha strongheadeed person like Peter black won't accept defeat, thanks Larrysun you always make my day....

What is wrong with Peter Black

I pray that your stupid love for a gold necklace will not put you into more troubles.

Nice update.

Breaking into Rhoda's home!! I'm expecting a twist to this story.

Breaking into Rhoda's home will reveal so much like Peter's been sleeping with an arch enemy's daughter...

this story don dey loose that remarkable ,astonishing, captivating ,brilliance it started with.. wtf! going back to get the jewelry like seriously??

Pls Mr Larrysun, I am in a very sad state right now, while gluttonously savoring the sweetness of the story "paradox of Abel" then It just stopped no further updates just some incomprehensible comments from other readers telling how magnificient detective Lot was to uncover the murderer of Jamal Malik.

Honestly, I'm wounded , how can It be remedied cuz if not I'll wail o, I GO BLOW WHEESUU eehee! . Heh! sumbori hold me o I NEED THE CONCLUDING PART OF THAT STORY *sobbing*

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Fazemood:
Pls Mr Larrysun, I am in a very sad state right now, while gluttonously savoring the sweetness of the story "paradox of Abel" then It just stopped no further updates just some incomprehensible comments from other readers telling how magnificient detective Lot was to uncover the murderer of Jamal Malik.

Honestly, I'm wounded , how can It be remedied cuz if not I'll wail o, I GO BLOW WHEESUU eehee! . Heh! sumbori hold me o I NEED THE CONCLUDING PART OF THAT STORY *sobbing*

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But, I love this work of art.

benzics:
the full story is now for sale, contact Larry's email for full details

Oh really? Thats fine. Thanks

Larrysun... I'm Finally Here With U Guys, After 2 To 3days Of Reading 4rm Page0. Please Dnt Keep Me Waiting Like The Others.

. In kiss Daniel's voice... I am in love oo... i'm in love with ur story..

T h i s t h r e a d / s t o r y s e e m s t o b e a punishment to me and some ( if am speaking on behalf of someone out there) of ur devoted fans and those following this story, how can someone be loading this page without any update...
Sometimes i do feel for u guys, it's not easy, esp. those hustling and also entertaining us here. just try to to update at least twice or thrice a week. Pls don't lose anger ontop this my comment if u find it a n n o y i n g.....







my opinio tho....



Keep it going am still following...

please we need update,you have been doing a great job, you have made some people smile this year so thank you

larrysun.... where are you?

Quinyoudee:
larrysun.... where are you?

Working on an update. Forgive me.