Chai! All for his friend. because of dis, Larry pls dont let any of dem die pls

Larry, pls don't make Basket die. The story is getting emotional. I can only imagine d story Black is gonna tell when he finally makes a breakthrough. But if there's one thing I know about Larrysun,it is the twist d story is gonna take @ d end especially where I said he's gonna make a Success.

This is so touching. life is not fair, i feel 4 those helpless boys, larry u are just d best words can't discribe how gud u are

sum1 had beta hold me b4 i dcid to give dis stupid pharmacist d beating of his life! cnt e undastnd dat stealing drugs worth two naira wuld b d last tin on a thief's mind? drug na food?? y r sum ppl jst damn heartless! its jst lyk beating sum1 dat stole bread nd all d person kips doing z stuffing his mouth wit d bread nd yt d beating wont stp bcus d fools refusd to c dat e z only trying to preserve his miserable life!
cwiuzly! i dnt tink sango's anger cn match mine ryt nw!
sum1 tld u anoda lyf z on d verge of being lost nd all u cn tink of z two naira!
larry i nid his address...e nids sum cwiuz talling to!
i knw black cnt die yt bt pls jst make dose fools c reason nd allow black gt bk to basket in tym to save his life!
*phew!* feels gud to lt d anger out
once again u av succeeded in making me forget dat d characters r only modelled on world realities nd i cnt gt a hold on any of dem unless i wanna gt a hold on society itself wich is rada impossible.
kudos nd tnks for sharing once again.....dis r d kind of stories dat nids to win d awards dat some excuse for a story r winning.
*i av one particular woman in mind*

"laws are like the cobweb,catching powerless flies but tear to shreds by fat cows.-Prof Gday.
Fat Cow-big time public looters. Powerless flies-petty thiefs
Feeling so sad...... Larryson,u're amazingly creative.

"laws are like the cobweb,catching powerless flies but tear to shreds by fat cows.-Prof Gday.
Fat Cow-big time public looters. Powerless flies-petty thief
Feeling so sad...... Larryson,u're amazingly creative.

If either Black or Basket dies, I will beat that pharmacist black and blue. somebody hold me before I kill somebody oooo.

Ollyfad:
sum1 had beta hold me b4 i dcid to give dis stupid pharmacist d beating of his life! cnt e undastnd dat stealing drugs worth two naira wuld b d last tin on a thief's mind? drug na food?? y r sum ppl jst damn heartless! its jst lyk beating sum1 dat stole bread nd all d person kips doing z stuffing his mouth wit d bread nd yt d beating wont stp bcus d fools refusd to c dat e z only trying to preserve his miserable life!
cwiuzly! i dnt tink sango's anger cn match mine ryt nw!
sum1 tld u anoda lyf z on d verge of being lost nd all u cn tink of z two naira!
larry i nid his address...e nids sum cwiuz talling to!
i knw black cnt die yt bt pls jst make dose fools c reason nd allow black gt bk to basket in tym to save his life!
*phew!* feels gud to lt d anger out
once again u av succeeded in making me forget dat d characters r only modelled on world realities nd i cnt gt a hold on any of dem unless i wanna gt a hold on society itself wich is rada impossible.
kudos nd tnks for sharing once again.....dis r d kind of stories dat nids to win d awards dat some excuse for a story r winning.
*i av one particular woman in mind*

Take a chill pill ma'am. Black will pull through in all these predicaments so long as he is the central character.
This is how great men are adversely forged.
Fasten ya seatbelt cos this is goin'na be a loooong ride.

Kudos Larry

Aww this is really saddening. Beautiful piece LarrySun kudos. Please keep Black alive.

Horrible!

LarrySun the master twister.

Looking at how Black will escape this alive.

But I think one of them will die. Since black is d protagonist, Basket myt b one to leave this world.

The last post got a brother sobbing. I pray Black doesn't die.

Larry keep up the good work, you sure are the best...

Hmmmmmm, I just av to say sumtin am a silent reader I hardly comment. These re my guesses; basket will be rescued by a good samaritan while black will be saved but they re definitely gonna lose contact nd meet yrs lata to be sworn enemies. I wish my guess is right sha anyway larrysun keep up d good wrk it's been a worthwhile ride with u so far

callous medics #b&balive#

supernet4:
Hmmmmmm, I just av to say sumtin am a silent reader I hardly comment. These re my guesses; basket will be rescued by a good samaritan while black will be saved but they re definitely gonna lose contact nd meet yrs lata to be sworn enemies. I wish my guess is right sha anyway larrysun keep up d good wrk it's been a worthwhile ride with u so far

If this happens, then we're in for one hellova story. Suspense-filled, emotional, mood-changing, eye-wetting chapters.

Iaz93:
If this happens, then we're in for one hellova story. Suspense-filled, emotional, mood-changing, eye-wetting chapters.

. I guess so

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stuff46:
I hope Larry does not take black into the hands of a Native doctor.

Btw, lovely update. Hoping Peter Black succeds in this his quest.

LOL! @Native doctor. The introduction of a native doctor would foil the storyline.

discoprophet:
Omoh ehn, oga Larry u dey do nice job here.

Thank you, sir. I dig your moniker.

Nickymezor:
Basket must nt die oooo..... I hope he makes it cuz Black is gonna be devastated...well done, Oga Larry

It's so sad.

NOooooo!!!.... larry noooo!!!!.... basket can't die naaaa!!

Adinije:
I have strong feelings that Basket will survive but he might end up becoming a Policeman, then friends will became foes. More grease to ur elbow Larry.

When your friend suddenly becomes your enemy, that means he has been hating on you right from day one.

I don't think that is the case between Black and Basket. Their own case is tragic.

Patebere:
Nice work

Thank you, sir.

Ollyfad:
*fervently praying* God please let dis b one of those sickness dat u tink u euld die bt end up surviving it.
av cried enof already...if basket dies my roommate myt end up binding nd taking me to a doctor.
pls pls pls dnt condemn black to a lonely lyf again...

I'm so sorry . At least, he would not be lonely anymore. Someone loved him.

Sleekyshuga:
Great job, Larry...


Basket shouldn't die pwizzzz ..


Still, I follow...

Thank you, ma'am. Some terrible things are beyond our controls. Even, sometimes, prayers are not answered. But the great tragedy may only happen to pave way for the greater good to manifest.

Larrysun, you're very heartless!
Basket died unfulfilling, I would have loved to watch him cuff Black when he turns a Cop.

Lola won't make it to the end, too.

Jollyjoy:
Oh larry! Plz do nt basket die. U are doing Great work here.

Thank you so much, ma'am.

labaski:
Larry, if u kill peter or basket, their blood ll be on u o.pls don't kill dem its dangerous plss.. d update was quite long.. thanks..

I hope this doesn't make me a bad storyteller.

omotalkie:
Chai! All for his friend. because of dis, Larry pls dont let any of dem die pls

It's beyond my power.

domido:
Larry, pls don't make Basket die. The story is getting emotional. I can only imagine d story Black is gonna tell when he finally makes a breakthrough. But if there's one thing I know about Larrysun,it is the twist d story is gonna take @ d end especially where I said he's gonna make a Success.

Let's wait and see.

mayemy:
This is so touching. life is not fair, i feel 4 those helpless boys, larry u are just d best words can't discribe how gud u are

Thank you so much, ma'am. Without you, there is no me.

Ollyfad:
sum1 had beta hold me b4 i dcid to give dis stupid pharmacist d beating of his life! cnt e undastnd dat stealing drugs worth two naira wuld b d last tin on a thief's mind? drug na food?? y r sum ppl jst damn heartless! its jst lyk beating sum1 dat stole bread nd all d person kips doing z stuffing his mouth wit d bread nd yt d beating wont stp bcus d fools refusd to c dat e z only trying to preserve his miserable life!
cwiuzly! i dnt tink sango's anger cn match mine ryt nw!
sum1 tld u anoda lyf z on d verge of being lost nd all u cn tink of z two naira!
larry i nid his address...e nids sum cwiuz talling to!
i knw black cnt die yt bt pls jst make dose fools c reason nd allow black gt bk to basket in tym to save his life!
*phew!* feels gud to lt d anger out
once again u av succeeded in making me forget dat d characters r only modelled on world realities nd i cnt gt a hold on any of dem unless i wanna gt a hold on society itself wich is rada impossible.
kudos nd tnks for sharing once again.....dis r d kind of stories dat nids to win d awards dat some excuse for a story r winning.
*i av one particular woman in mind*

I can only imagine how angry you would be right now.

I know that particular woman. She's awesome!

ProfGday:
"laws are like the cobweb,catching powerless flies but tear to shreds by fat cows.-Prof Gday.
Fat Cow-big time public looters. Powerless flies-petty thiefs
Feeling so sad...... Larryson,u're amazingly creative.

Nice quote, Prof. Thank you so much, sir.