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Heartbroken! by OnoEdosio(m): 10:10am On Jan 20, 2009
A broken heart's chant.
I was hibernated for a few
You convinced me to come out and play
You promised it'll be good outside
You promised to hold my hand
I came and held on to your words
You left me flat in the cold
How was I to know
That you'd do the things you did
Oh had I known
Had I known
I would have stayed curled up in my shell, my safe haven where love was true
I tried and I'm tired
May be in another lifetime
I'll try again
But one thing is for sure
It won't be with you
Re: Heartbroken! by OnoEdosio(m): 12:59pm On Jan 20, 2009
The Voice of Pain.
As each second passes
I feel stabs from a million shattered glasses
I feel like my days are numbered
And every sound of my heart-beat is thundered
I feel like a bird just learning to fly
"The next minute", I feel like an old man ready to die
My gauge reads: "Empty"
But my assignments are still plenty
Choked with the stress of suppressing my fears,
I sometimes feel like succumbing to tears
Though gagged by the strength of my pride
I'm still haunted by these weaknesses I hide
Listen as my soul screams
For my heart and mind have become rival teams
Re: Heartbroken! by nature262(m): 5:40pm On Aug 02, 2009
Nice work , This is what d literature section should be about.
Re: Heartbroken! by emekagh(m): 11:47pm On Aug 05, 2009
Nice work Ono.

I like to suggest that for clarity sake, try to separate the heading from the body with at least a line or two. Good work.
Re: Heartbroken! by MyneWhite1(f): 11:53pm On Aug 05, 2009
Very romantic poems, one can feel the pain of the broken heart with words like choked, shattered, screams, empty, weaknesses, etc. Good work, keep writing even when you get over the heartbreak.
Re: Heartbroken! by TOYOSI20(f): 12:14am On Aug 06, 2009
awww,. . . .how sad, . . sad
Re: Heartbroken! by SeanT21(f): 4:32am On Aug 10, 2009
**I love it**
Re: Heartbroken! by kodylicky(f): 12:33pm On Aug 10, 2009
I love this

nice work
Re: Heartbroken! by OnoEdosio(m): 7:25pm On Aug 10, 2009
Thanx everybody!!THANKS THANKS n THANKS.i think im ova d heartbrk n subsequent works shuld show it.thanks again n again.
Re: Heartbroken! by OnoEdosio(m): 4:39pm On Aug 11, 2009
How can you be so calm,
while beads of sweat pop from my palm?
How can you dismiss my presence,
when you are my lifes essence?
Calming my palpitating nerves,
like restraining an elephant in heat serves.
A smile from you to a lowly peasant,
scorpion sting become as kisses pleasant.
Woe is me,for I beg for the scraps off your table,
Queen of the swollen head,beauty of a fairy fable.

Please send in suggestions for a title for this poem.
Re: Heartbroken! by pinkstar(f): 3:13pm On Aug 21, 2009
A lonely & empty heart

Re: Heartbroken! by OnoEdosio(m): 5:00pm On Aug 21, 2009
@Pinkstar, Splendid.Simply splendid!I love ur depiction of an empty heart.Did u design it urself?
Re: Heartbroken! by pinkstar(f): 12:46am On Aug 22, 2009
Pinkstar whats up cheesy. love this pics shocked of yours 4rm Cross shocked

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