Weak Love
Why did he leave me?
Leaving me so weak,
week after week.
You made me feel so small,
like I can’t do anything at all.
It’s like I am at a cliff peak,
destined to fall and let my blood leak.
I feel so low,
like someone punched my face blow by blow.
Different emotions run through my head,
as if I pierced my wrist and inserted lead.
He was strong and confident,
I was weak and liked a compliment.
I didn’t know I was insecure,
He was so positive, he was like a lure.
I feel that he left me because of my action,
actions of my obsessiveness is like a fraction.
It’s a part of my twisted mind,
which I thought was divine.
Until he left me,left me,
Feeling so weak.

This reads like rap, with sweet but simple lyrics. This is good. And it is anything but amateur.

Nice. I'm guessing that you are female right?

oh yeah, I have lot's of some poems
but yeah i'mmma female,
check out da profile,
but yeah, thanks,

Ujunwa kedu? I mara mma nwanyi. Daalu!

idinma, sorry, but i don't know much ibo, i know when i hear it, but u can teach me,

Well, I'm naturally an artistic linguist but can't go beyond a few expressions in English and French, lol, though I can speak, read and write well in Igbo. Duh! I could teach you then, if you are ready to "follow the teacher" like one of my lecturers would say in those days.

if that's true life,
that i hope u're now strong.
show me that brother, and he'll pay for it.
nice poem, keep it flowing.