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| Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by pcaliphate(m): 12:37pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
HOLD ON On the verge of quitting, Adamu contemplated between choices He was fed up of the fluctuations & his brain was filled with noises Noise of whether to opt out or to care less He lost his fiancee to the magical touch of her greediness To the keep the breath going was of no value to him Better days ahead but his vision to see this was near dim On that certain evening, he went to the store house to buy a rope Tears were boiling in his eyes as he concluded he couldn’t cope He searched for a location to finalize his decision He was ready but reality had a poor diction His will was the suit & the rope became his tie Blackout*******************Adamu didn’t die He was saved by the intervention of Nature via Time A hunter aimed at him but the rope received the rhyme The concept of his life was deeply influenced by that situation He fuelled the vehicle of his faith with his rigid determination The lost lovely smile was restored back to its default setting The fiancee of the other day then found solace in regretting By Olowo Tosin John Pls Callment! Even if you don't have Credit. You can borrow your attention. Thanks in Advance |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by LarrySun(m): 6:24pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
God gracious! 1 Like |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by pcaliphate(m): 6:53pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
LarrySun:How is the work sir? |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by Nobody: 6:56pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
Am I dreaming??  |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by LarrySun(m): 8:28pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
pcaliphate:The work is not the best in the world. |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by pcaliphate(m): 8:33pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
How is the work ma |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by Divepen1(m): 8:52pm On Jun 08, 2015 |
*grins*
Well, you've got a lot of work to do.
Let's with *callment*, it is COMMENT.
Your story should answer
Who?
Why the act?
Where?
When?
*sigh* Keep writing. |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by pcaliphate(m): 6:01am On Jun 09, 2015 |
Divepen1:Callment is a word play. I said Pls Callment even if you don't have Credit, you can borrow your attention. Who- Adamu, Why the act-He was tired of the fluctuation of fluency in his life. Where- In a bush. When- on that certain evening. Its not near-perfect tho! But I believed I tried. Thanks for the comment sir. |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by Queening(f): 12:32pm On Jul 11, 2015 |
| Re: Pls Mod! Chalk Me Buy Taking This Piece To The Front Page. Pls I Beg You. Thanks by Obinnau(m): 9:48pm On Jul 11, 2015 |
N.. |
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