Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / New
Stats: 3,150,813 members, 7,810,119 topics. Date: Friday, 26 April 2024 at 09:07 PM

Poem: Come Over - Poems For Review - Nairaland

Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Poems For Review / Poem: Come Over (2434 Views)

(2) (3) (4)

(1) (Reply) (Go Down)

Poem: Come Over by StephenP(m): 11:12pm On Feb 24, 2009
Each call I make to you begins in seduction
No time to play so I boldly ask you to

Come over

Let me lure you into my arms
Charm you with potions that motion your heart in my direction
My actions speak louder than words
So I pull you till we are hidden deep beneath the covers
And like lovers we make love
We lay
In a volcanic state of mind
You and I
Ready to erupt so we let nothing interrupt our time
Doors locked, phones off, we take no chances
Tonight baby, we emancipate from fate and free ourselves to this moment
Love so deep, it becomes potent
Still I live, so there must be immortality in your kiss
Hmmm…a rhythm like ours is rare
A balance of love and lust
Each passion, each thrust
Each moan is an increasing note before the crescendo
I head lower to increase this high
To say I’m not addicted would be a lie
So

Each call I make to you begins in seduction
No time to play so I boldly ask you to

Come over

So I could taste the pleasure of your skin
Leaving little bites marks to mark the spots that make your head spin till you almost lose control
Eager to show my kingship to my throne
Yet I, yearn to give you the key to my heart which you most definitely own
Your body is no battle field so I work with ease
Like a king building an empire, I take over your weakened knees and fluttering heart
Marking my territory as I pull you in
And it becomes our creed that you're mine and I'm yours outside and within
With the words from your lips you command

Come over

[img]http://pro.corbis.com/images/42-15174554.jpg?size=67&uid={7c8d4319-0c58-4b27-9c17-2cce5cc692d5}[/img]
Re: Poem: Come Over by Epi: 12:11am On Feb 25, 2009
StevenP

Thumbs up mon. Nice!!!. . hmmm, lets say My mind is wondering,

Oh, i will only come over if you promise me one thing - not to bite me the way Chris Brown bit Rihanna wink cheesy

1 love
StephenP:

Leaving little bites marks to mark the spots that make your head spin till you almost lose control
Come over

[img]http://pro.corbis.com/images/42-15174554.jpg?size=67&uid={7c8d4319-0c58-4b27-9c17-2cce5cc692d5}[/img]
Re: Poem: Come Over by DaPhoenix(f): 12:30am On Feb 25, 2009
Yes!!!



I loved it!!!

P.S. I'm coming . . . over right now.

Re: Poem: Come Over by tope2000(f): 12:39am On Feb 25, 2009
Girl move out of the way angry angry angry
Stephen is calling me to come over grin grin tongue

@Stephen
Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kiss
Re: Poem: Come Over by DaPhoenix(f): 12:57am On Feb 25, 2009
tope2000:

Girl move out of the way angry angry angry
Stephen is calling me to come over grin grin tongue

Re: Poem: Come Over by LadyT(f): 8:18pm On Feb 25, 2009
@Stephen shocked

Really well written nothing smutty in that at all I loved it! kiss

Rotflmao@tope and phoenix
Re: Poem: Come Over by StephenP(m): 6:05pm On Mar 21, 2009
LadyT:

@Stephen shocked

Really well written nothing smutty in that at all I loved it!   kiss

Rotflmao@tope and phoenix

Thanks Ms. T!!

@Tope2000 & DaPhoenix, you girls crack me all up the time . . . thank you so much.
Re: Poem: Come Over by bluespice(f): 6:10pm On Mar 21, 2009
phoenix n tope
u guys made my day!
worrahell! ROFLMAO!!!! grin grin grin

nice stephen hadnt seen it b4
nice


quick question, do u only write poems like this?
Re: Poem: Come Over by StephenP(m): 6:13pm On Mar 21, 2009
This is the only kind of poem that many nairalanders have responded quickly to. I wrote one on Nigeria and no one even looked at it!! rofl
Re: Poem: Come Over by Ibime(m): 6:29pm On Mar 21, 2009
StephenP:

This is the only kind of poem that many nairalanders have responded quickly to. I wrote one on Nigeria and no one even looked at it!! rofl

Don't mind these your groupies, especially that Phoenix with her irritating .gifs

This poem is wack to me sha. grin


I read the best poem on NL yesterday, and no one even looked at it:

https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-56428.0.html
Re: Poem: Come Over by bluespice(f): 6:29pm On Mar 21, 2009
hateration! grin
Re: Poem: Come Over by bluespice(f): 6:31pm On Mar 21, 2009
ibime u have a point so does stephen
Nigerians have been brought up on the culture of love and romance,
its only natural their gravitation towards such poems


on that poem its very different and unique in its own way
on its being the best, to each his opinion smiley
Re: Poem: Come Over by StephenP(m): 6:36pm On Mar 21, 2009
Ibime:

Don't mind these your groupies, especially that Phoenix with her irritating .gifs

This poem is wack to me sha.  grin

hahahaha. . . don't come at my people like that. They truly love the poems and I love them all.

Ibime:

I read the best poem on NL yesterday, and no one even looked at it:

https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-56428.0.html

I just looked at it. I don't know how I feel about it yet.
Re: Poem: Come Over by DaPhoenix(f): 7:26pm On Mar 23, 2009
Ibime:

Don't mind these your groupies, especially that Phoenix with her irritating .gifs

This poem is wack to me sha.  grin

Hi!

I don't think I know you.
Re: Poem: Come Over by Ibime(m): 8:57pm On Mar 23, 2009
DaPhoenix:

Hi!

I don't think I know you.

Please keep it that way. grin

(1) (Reply)

A Night-in-gale. / Elixir Of A Broken Heart / The Shirt Eating Contest

(Go Up)

Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health
religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket

Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10)

Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 20
Disclaimer: Every Nairaland member is solely responsible for anything that he/she posts or uploads on Nairaland.