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I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by don4real18(m): 12:47pm On Jul 19, 2015 |
With the use of Corel photo paint
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Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by fattbabakay(m): 5:56pm On Jul 19, 2015 |
Nice...but how d head kon big like dat? 2 Likes |
Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by Donald3d(m): 7:25pm On Jul 19, 2015 |
don4real18:you could work on the size of the head though 1 Like |
Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by imasineffect(m): 4:38pm On Jul 20, 2015 |
not bad but u have to practice more don4real18: |
Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by Dewze(m): 9:09pm On Jul 20, 2015 |
Nice try bro. 1. I would suggest you move the texts away from the edges some more to give it some form of structure. 2. The colors saturated-yellow and light brown do not work very well together on the same page, especially when they are the only colors there (no other color to compliment or at least distract the viewer's eyes from the bad combination). I suggest you research more on color theory, lots of tutorials online on that. 3. The main title text (I assume "the biafran soldier") should have the saturated color and not the sub text I.e the "Season 1". Saturated colors make your image/text jump out of the page and gives it some sense of emphasy. I believe you would want the viewer's eyes to see the main title first before any other thing (except the main image of course). Saturating it instead like I advised will go a long way in helping you achieve that. Well, that's my humble contribution. I hope it helps. Kudos bro. |
Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by kinth(m): 7:12pm On Jul 21, 2015 |
someone shld help criticize this too
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Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by willbob(m): 7:18am On Jul 22, 2015 |
kinth: *Too much colours. * Too much fonts * It does not look like modern designs. #No offence |
Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by Nobody: 8:29am On Jul 22, 2015 |
Op can u design Artwork for Songs !!! |
Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by Nobody: 8:30am On Jul 22, 2015 |
don4real18: Can u design artwork for. songs !!! 1 Like |
Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by Dewze(m): 6:41am On Jul 23, 2015 |
Iamsynord:Do you mean something like this?
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Re: I Need Your Criticism On This Work For My Improvement by don4real18(m): 2:59am On Jul 28, 2015 |
Yup @Donald3d |
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