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| The Broken Water Pot!!! by vivianpeal(f): 8:40pm On Aug 29, 2015 |
Hello friends on this site. I just feel like posting this if it will help someone out there as it helped me when i wrote it. Enjoy it and feel free to say your ur mind. it is not the usual poem form cos i call it poemprose. ********************************************************************************************************** He said she was beautiful and has the most charming smiles! Behind those great smiles lie that broken heart! He said she is strong but deep within he is her weakness her breaking point! He said with her lies the future but the future was a mirage, a faint dream and a dancing vapor! He said they will grow old together but they never lived a year together! She said she will not cry, but be strong, but what could she do to her bleeding heart? Torn into shades of thousand shreds by that same one that once whipped her tears. To all my friends whose heart has been broke Whose pain runs deep. Just hang in there, there is always a balm that soothes the pain that is TIME! |
| Re: The Broken Water Pot!!! by UrennaNkoli(f): 8:49pm On Aug 29, 2015 |
Cool |
| Re: The Broken Water Pot!!! by DuchessLily(f): 9:12pm On Aug 29, 2015 |
Nice |
| Re: The Broken Water Pot!!! by EmperorAnthony(m): 11:44pm On Aug 29, 2015 |
surface value... A frace. 1 Like |
| Re: The Broken Water Pot!!! by radical4jesus(f): 11:55pm On Aug 29, 2015 |
EmperorAnthony: |
| Re: The Broken Water Pot!!! by EmperorAnthony(m): 12:17am On Aug 30, 2015 |
[quote author=radical4jesus post=37476516][/quote] A POEM THE LEARNING CHILD *Confusion besets him on how to get his heart desire *He struggles endlessly with the barrier befor him *Wondering how on earth he would eliminate the barrier *Tears of frustration soon begins to pop out *Lo and behold comes his savior wanting to pacify *Recognition of barrier fills his savior *With relative ease his savior disassembles the barrier *Unknown to his savior the learning child watches and learns with captivation *How happy the learning child is to get his heart desire *Fulfilment fills him for he has not only gotten his heart desire *He has also learnt to disassemble the barrier to his heart desire without tears *He stares at the world with renewed vigour and courage to conquer the world before him. *Barrier = Biscuit's case *Heart Desire = Biscuit #€mperical Poem |
| Re: The Broken Water Pot!!! by vivianpeal(f): 11:15pm On Sep 01, 2015 |
EmperorAnthony:well for you it could be a surface value but still thanks for the comment |
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