If I Cry - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| If I Cry by hansibone(op): 4:46pm On May 04, 2009 |
IF I CRY Visions of love evolve us both, Entwined in passion of a voyage in a love boat, Intimacies gods felt and men loath, Love in my mind to the end was an oath, Kisses we shared so deep i fell, Moments my being dared the word called fear, So into you with lighting speed i was there, Heaven ha! I felt my dear, Time my enemy chose to invade us, Revealing your face hidden behind white gloss, Travails of all sort erupted from no cause, The end was "I'm Leaving" a dreadful clause, How then do you think to console me when you try? My love is empty;my heart stack dry, My being aching for touches i cant let lie, What then can you do, IF I CRY, ? Damon Hill 01/27/09  |
| Re: If I Cry by Epi: 4:22pm On May 23, 2009 |
A sweet poem, very touching |
| Re: If I Cry by oreshade(m): 10:23pm On May 24, 2009 |
mmm, |
| Re: If I Cry by chura(m): 6:06pm On Jun 05, 2009 |
hansibone,i like your poems "Beautiful ones" and "If i cry" sorry to ask,did you write them? what about the name Damon Hill? pls,check out my new poem "everybody is angry" |
| Re: If I Cry by hansibone(op): 5:54pm On Jun 06, 2009 |
Ok chuma, i wrote dos poems n i av posted sum oda ones, Damon Hill is my alias, rememba copyrite laws?dats y i drop my alias n d date d poem was writen, wuld chek on urs, hola |
| Re: If I Cry by ohCorie: 7:42pm On Jun 11, 2009 |
I like it a lot, I can only speak for myself, but, I think many may relate to this |
| Re: If I Cry by hansibone(op): 2:50pm On Jun 12, 2009 |
Thanks , We are in one way related to one anoda, LIFE IS A MYSTERY, not yet SOLVED |
| Re: If I Cry by nex(m): 2:54am On Jul 07, 2009 |
@Hansibone this is a good one. Really cool. Had to come check it out. Keep it up bro. Meanwhile, I posted "Lagos Traffic" I think that's possibly the best poem I've written recently. Probably all I've written since last year. Hope you like it. |
| Re: If I Cry by hansibone(op): 1:49pm On Nov 24, 2010 |
If I cry just leave me alone please |