TRIALS;
In a faraway land I found love,
one that i didnt truely deserve,
nothing like the previous "pequinas"av dated,
one that rilli made me elated,
----without d comfort n'luxury I'm used to,
----without my immoral shenanigans,
I learnt how to be a man!

FATE;
Being penniless n' alone,
she made me whole!
with all my unhealthyhabits,
, she tolerated me!!
In my trying times,
she was aleiz a dime!!!
but little did i know that I was on a scale,
being measured for my worth n'tell tales.

RELATIONSHIP;
She bowed out when d ovation was loudest,
after she'd reformed my troubled being,
my heart sank like shakespearse tempest,
that i cant feel a single thing,
and so I CRY for you:
cos whenever i think of us,
its the favourite song in the CD i bought for u-
-that I alweiz remember!
"all the TRIALS and FATE in the RELATIONSHIP have all made me strong"
, but still i shed these tears.

sweet

@ odada
Trials, fate, relationship -deifinitely will make us stronger.

Strong words, good poem!!

thanks y'all!the inspiration came from a girl i rilli loved and met while serving!i guess am stronger now thankx to all of that

Its all good.
Keep it real. 1Luv !

nice one really

Good

i weep!

Nice poem, It reminds me of somethn
but now am stronger

saintsam:

Nice poem, It reminds me of somethn
but now am stronger

odada:

thanks y'all!the inspiration came from a girl i rilli loved and met while serving!i guess am stronger now thankx to all of that

nice poem! resonates true.

true that!men

nice poem, though i really don't buy the 'hero-worship' undertone.

@aloofa
'hero-worship'undertone? what do u mean men?

wow! that is remind of something I used to be, NOW i am much changed.

Like the song I learned for solo rehearsal the last minute last year for Ohio state we all deaf choir travelled---until the night I performed singing in sign language with CD music, oh my lord everyone in the congregation SHOUTED!

"Changed, Changed" song by Walter Hawkins and The Hawkins Family.

awwwwwwwwwwww baby