New single, first single.. Please enjoy

https://my.notjustok.com/track/download/id/59385

Lyrics
Verse 1:
It feels like watching the best part of my Mexican soap when I am staring in your eyes
The light dims and i hear the bursting strings and wonder where you've been hidden all my life
Grey skies turning blue when I'm thinking of me and you
The radiance of your smile is brighter than the sun
My love for you is true
And all I have I'll give to you

Chorus :
Baby, I see you're the one for me
Mo ri pe e e
Baby, I know iwo lokan mi fe

Verse 2:
The dark clouds of tribe and culture hovering above me when I stand waiting on your shores
But yet still, I'll bask in the rays that pierces through the skies, ill be waiting for you
Why should your son and my daughter be strangers
When we can make them brother and sister
My love for you is true
And all I have I'll give to you.
Back to chorus
Refrain:
Twinkle, Twinkle little star
What a wonder you are
The sparkle in ur eyes sets my soul on fire
When the rush and fame is gone
And the stage is no more fun
With you ill go on.
Back to chorus

Ends

Lalasticlala please help move to FP.

Emma, nice piece.

Lalasticlala Trust me, this Track is Wonderful.
Let's Support our Own.
A talented Nairalader.

He has put so much time and effort to produce this piece.

Kindly move to the Front Page Sir.
Thanks.

ShyNeptune:
Lalasticlala Trust me, this Track is Wonderful.
Let's Support our Own.
A talented Nairalader.

He has put so much time and effort to produce this piece.

Kindly move to the Front Page Sir.
Thanks.

Thanks Shyneptune.. Lalasticlala abeg o.. I go buy u fighter jet when I blow o. Thanks. mynd44 one for u too

cool start up kilokeys.. Nice lyrics but your keys re way too clumsy ova yo voice..shoulda bn in low form and mak yo voic more clear..then again ur voice kp fallin off like youre scared.. Pls get a gd vocalist to train up yo voice..and a nice producer for the keys and beat...keep it up ..its a start..

Mathematical:

cool start up kilokeys.. Nice lyrics but your keys re way too clumsy ova yo voice..shoulda bn in low form and mak yo voic more clear..then again ur voice kp fallin off like youre scared.. Pls get a gd vocalist to train up yo voice..and a nice producer for the keys and beat...keep it up ..its a start..

Thanks ill get the raw data then master it in a better studio.. This job is actually worth the money spent. Thanks.. U sound like a professional.. What do u do?

kilokeys:

Thanks ill get the raw data then master it in a better studio.. This job is actually worth the money spent. Thanks.. U sound like a professional.. What do u do?

am not oo.am just lover of good music...a law student

Mathematical:

cool start up kilokeys.. Nice lyrics but your keys re way too clumsy ova yo voice..shoulda bn in low form and mak yo voic more clear..then again ur voice kp fallin off like youre scared.. Pls get a gd vocalist to train up yo voice..and a nice producer for the keys and beat...keep it up ..its a start..

i would upload my song next week so you can give your opinion on it