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Lone Watcher. by nikkybeez(f): 12:34am On Feb 08, 2016 |
A Still, Stoic, Ground Lodging Gangrenous bodies, Green ones;Stale Ones Enclosed in tombs;Encircled with branches. Emotional Epitaphs! Blooming roses and Matte Flowers, Sitting on earth surfaces and Cracked Concretes are Being Kissed by struggling weeds. Sniffling! He Watched with dismay,His Arena of Ignoble Display, Which Shelters the Bones of the Poor;the Body of the Rich. Where the Powerful Cannot Pose as There is no hope for dominance. He Then Realized! That man's original habitation, Is Neither an Edenic Suite Nor a furnished Estate But Six Feet Under,Where Dancing Bugs salivate. 1 Like |
Re: Lone Watcher. by joseph1832(m): 6:01am On Feb 08, 2016 |
The theme of the poem is 'death'. You should learn how to structure your poem. Nice poem. 1 Like |
Re: Lone Watcher. by nikkybeez(f): 8:00am On Feb 08, 2016 |
Thanx bro, am still new at it that's why. |
Re: Lone Watcher. by joseph1832(m): 8:04am On Feb 08, 2016 |
nikkybeez:We're all new. Lol. Read other poems and observe how the lines are structured and where the lines break, so you can learn the act of structuring. |
Re: Lone Watcher. by nikkybeez(f): 8:38am On Feb 08, 2016 |
joseph1832:kk I will. |
Re: Lone Watcher. by whitecloth: 3:19pm On Jul 14, 2016 |
Lone watcher: like a grave attendant who is watching the grave of both rich and young, and reminiscing on the lives of the dead. Am I right? Nice poem but not well structured. 1 Like |
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