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Lets Breathe by breathing(f): 7:39pm On Jul 09, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by Cyberfreak(f): 8:21pm On Jul 11, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by breathing(f): 8:06pm On Jul 15, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by wildbubble(f): 2:13pm On Jul 18, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by platinumnk(f): 10:01pm On Jul 22, 2009
At times
i hide whats
inside
because ive been beaten up so many times
before
Like a fish grasping for its last breath
to release it
would kill me
I would perfer to be an onlooker
and hide my ugly scars
but seeing u opened up
and seeing ur heart beat so truely
struck something in me
that i wouldnt have
foreseen
so today, maybe our blackness will mix
and make a
purple heart
if not, an ear is hearing
never mind eyes
and ure talent is not wasted
Re: Lets Breathe by breathing(f): 8:49am On Jul 24, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by breathing(f): 11:55am On Jul 24, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by Cyberfreak(f): 10:42pm On Jul 25, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by platinumnk(f): 2:21am On Jul 27, 2009
that was so sweet that i started to think that for you beneath meant for me.
yeah, i feel exactly that way. infact i feel so that way that i feel you researched on me before writing that.
do you get that? i doubt
thanks anyway cuz i still believe its for me.


my dear take what u can
u story was so deep
so profound
at times i speak
without knowing what comes out
because
someone else is talking
through me
Re: Lets Breathe by breathing(f): 3:42pm On Jul 27, 2009
@ cyberfreak
welcome back. the sad story? i don't know, maybe because sad stories make better stories for me.
yeah, th girl in the story is as sad as i wanted her to be.
No short stories? no qualms. anytime you are ready, i would be waiting
PDUSS was coined by me, so don't go using it unles you want to cite me (lol)
have fun

@platinum

i am glad the story was deep. the way i wanted it.
i am reading Wole Soyinka's 'THE MAN DIED'
a book very difficult to read cuz of Soyinka's language
anyway, i am actually a starting to understand it, and here is something interesting from the book. here it is


Self-defence. That is why I write. That is how I manage to keep my mind under control. If I let it loose, unsupported by the frame of written thought, it goes wild. It takes sinister by-ways and ends up begetting monsters.
…We need somebody else’s mind in order to keep on working terms with our own. We also need moments devoid of thought
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Re: Lets Breathe by Cyberfreak(f): 7:23pm On Jul 27, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by breathing(f): 8:15am On Jul 28, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by Cyberfreak(f): 4:41am On Jul 29, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by breathing(f): 1:12pm On Jul 29, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by Cyberfreak(f): 2:02pm On Aug 02, 2009
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Re: Lets Breathe by breathing(f): 12:53pm On Aug 05, 2009
So long, so LONG, ASUU strike, so long. soon we'd be saying merry christmas, still on strike

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