Politicowizard:
Adamu Keneth Ogunleye
22 Ogundare Street
Iyanapaja, Lagos State
07012345678
November 13th, 2015

HR Manager
XYZ Limited
Union Marble House
1 Allfred Rewane Road
PMB 40032
Falamo Ikoyi, Lagos

Dear Sir,
In regard of the position of Executive Trainee Refinery you posted on your career website, I would like to take this opportunity to apply. Without wishing to sound boastful, I recently graduated with a first class degree in civil engineering. I am keenly excited about this opportunity and as a big stage for my talents, I am particularly attracted to your highly reputed organization because of its array of opportunities for career growth as well as my drive in bringing my strengths to bear towards realizing company’s new heights.
As a proactive and highly resourceful fresher, my penchant for excellence and achieving mindset are second to none. I have a first-rate skill in AutoCAD, Orion and MS Office Suite. More so, I grasp fresh concepts quickly and can easily adapt and fit-in to changing environments and tasks. My experiences with Emchai Nigeria Limited has helped me develop good leadership and entrepreneurial qualities, impressive interpersonal and communication skills with a proven ability to work in a multi-cultural setting. I believe I offer the right combination of skills to just be that person.
For your reference, I have enclosed a copy of my resume. Thank you for your favorable consideration of my application as I look forward to showcasing my abilities further at a personal interview and subsequently joining your team.

Sincerely,
Adamu Keneth Ogunleye.
Enclosed: CV

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