SHEER FICTION...


PERFECT MCSNUP SUCCESS


You're beautiful, oh... It's only so true... Yea, even inside you're simply beautiful... Alas you're so beautiful it seems that's all I care about... And yes I did care for beyond your beauty... Or at least so I thought... Until, the perils of your pulchritude did set in... Beautiful peril? Oh yeah, tis only the peril of your heart that can match thine beauty's perils... But how could someone so beautiful be so perilous...? Yeah... Could it be the eyes that did her beauty behold, but beheld cupidly? Nah... Cupid beholds not for the little lad is but blindly folded...but Blind Cupid, cupids not blindly safe to gain blind advantages... Well, I be one who believes not in Cupid nor his arrows... Thus seeth I thine perils amidst thine sparkles... And alas I see you're spotless in beauty's define... But thine perils makes of it all Mirage... For thou possess not my alterations when I your alterations finds... So I remit in remission and penance in penitence... You're beautiful, yet I feel it naught... You're perilous and I feel it's lot... And withersoever nay whatsoever my inward plots... You're sheerly going to be my created character... For just as my writ to possess you is but fictitious... So my writing of you be sheer fiction...

Since you prefer it bn called a poem....... Maybe you have to edit it anyways I love the sincerity of the tone.

Swissheart:
Since you prefer it bn called a poem....... Maybe you have to edit it anyways I love the sincerity of the tone.

Thanks... What would you rather have it called? I'll appreciate more insight.