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Beauty And The Dream by Basic(m): 2:58am On Nov 07, 2006 |
BEAUTY AND THE DREAM All alone I sat on that fine evening The dusk,a cool breeze was heralding Then an epitome of beauty by me passed Like a fresh tomato,her face was rubicund I paused to behold her gait so gorgeous And her body frame so beauteous Gradually,down the lane she disappeared "Go after her,"my heart ordered I turned into a dog at that instance And like I sighted a bone,I covered the distance I ran in a way I've ne'er done before For I kept falling in love the more I approached her about my feelings And ere long,we were already handling Something halted our honeymoon abruptly I left the romantic dreamland untimely. |
Re: Beauty And The Dream by Oracle(m): 3:13am On Nov 07, 2006 |
Basic, i must tell you, This is wonderful itz more like a story but i don't understand the end. I turned into a dog at that instance I particularly love that verse |
Re: Beauty And The Dream by gwatala(m): 7:11pm On Nov 07, 2006 |
Good title. Imaginative. |
Re: Beauty And The Dream by dammyboy(m): 8:07pm On Nov 08, 2006 |
Wow! this is great! it captures a very complex process as falling in love in simple poetic pictures, such vivid imagery! , But it was all a dream! I hope you didn't wet your undies! I like your flow and your choice of words! Good write! |
Re: Beauty And The Dream by Basic(m): 3:19am On Nov 12, 2006 |
Basic:@ Oracle,what I actually meant was that I woke up unexpectedly from my sleep while the sweet dream was still going on.You know the whole poem is a dream. |
Re: Beauty And The Dream by kachii(m): 10:31am On Nov 16, 2006 |
nice walk basic. just that to me love is corpse |
Re: Beauty And The Dream by Basic(m): 12:20pm On Nov 22, 2006 |
Thanks everybody for the comments. For more of my poems you can check www.basicpoetry..com |
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