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The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by oludare007: 7:21am On Mar 20, 2016 |
THE END OF MY FEARS Oh ye, my fears! Will you come a little closer? You must lend me your ears I can’t tolerate your strength any longer The more I try to avoid you The more you get closer The more I try to evade you The more you get stronger Your arrogance reeks to the sky With your strength, you pulled me down Your victory, you always declare Even in my sweat, I was always the clown You bullied me at the slightest chance You laughed at me when I was down You abandoned me in my moments of trance You made me into nothing but a clown Today, we must come to terms And you must lend me your ears From today, you will reside by my side There will be no more drifting apart I must keep my courage close But you, my fears must stay closer I will go all the ways you go Until the last of your existence is conquered Oh ye, my fears Will you come a little closer? You must lend me your ears I can’t tolerate your strength any longer *while I was a kid, I had my shares of fears. Many of which I respected and try to avoid. But as I grow older, I realised that, avoiding your fear will o ly make it stronger. You have to pull it closer to your heart, embrace it- and it will only be then, that you can conquer it. Thank you. 1 Like |
Re: The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by akanniade10(m): 7:23am On Mar 20, 2016 |
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Re: The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by oludare007: 7:24am On Mar 20, 2016 |
What are your fears? What are your aspirations that you had to abandon because of fear? This is for you...you can do this.. |
Re: The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by oludare007: 7:27am On Mar 20, 2016 |
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Re: The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by oludare007: 7:27am On Mar 20, 2016 |
Thanks, Sir akanniade10: |
Re: The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by texanomaly(f): 2:53pm On Mar 20, 2016 |
Nicely done. I like how you used personification to bring your fears to life and speak to them. You started out using a rhyming scheme in stanzas 1-4 and continued in your last one. You dropped it in stanzas 5-6. You might try fixing that. Insightful work. |
Re: The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by oludare007: 10:06am On Mar 21, 2016 |
texanomaly:thanks ma'am. |
Re: The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by lizbethy: 10:45am On Mar 21, 2016 |
Tanx for this wonderful poem , it spice me up to face & fight my fears |
Re: The End Of My Fears. A Motivational Poem. by oludare007: 8:43am On Mar 22, 2016 |
lizbethy:pls do. Do that which you feared most...and ur fears will diminish greatly |
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