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A Wish by chistiana(f): 12:16pm On Nov 17, 2006
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine,
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

From Christiana
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 5:35pm On Nov 19, 2006
hey chistiana,dats more than just one wish.U were makin 5 wishes. wink
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 5:58pm On Nov 19, 2006
If I should make a wish,hmmmmmm,wat would i wish,Am still thinking.
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 2:22pm On Nov 20, 2006
so think fast am waiting
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 4:24pm On Nov 20, 2006
Christiana,am still thinking.Have u listen to R J SONG TITLED 'IF I HAVE ONE WISH'?
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 7:15pm On Nov 20, 2006
nope so tell me ,

whats the one wish is it going to drive ur girl krazy or sweep her off her feet
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 8:45am On Nov 21, 2006
u made me laugh,christiana,well if I have one wish,I would wish for wisdom like king solomon in the Bible,I think if I one wisdom,even my Girl friend would benefit frm it. cheesycheesy
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 9:10am On Nov 21, 2006
hey guy I love that i never knew u differnt from other guys.

Thats interesting, and may God grant u that wish.
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 11:27am On Nov 21, 2006
Thanks christiana.here is my poem on wisdom.

WISDOM


Life's simply an adventure , nothing less and nothing more
And it's Destiny that starts you that first day.
But though your path's been scripted, it's your choices that decide
How well you've played the game along the way.

And when the journey's over and it's time to mark your score
That chronicles the progress that you've gained.
It's not the final tally of the wealth that you've amassed
Nor all the knowledge that you have attained.

It all comes down to wisdom and what you've learned of life
And how you've used that wisdom to unlock
The doors that hold the answers to the universe and more
And let you see the truths that others mock.

And not an ounce of wisdom's gained from all the games you've won,
Nor from those times you've finished far ahead.
It's only gained from lessons learned from all the times you've lost
And all those painful moments when you bled.

Oh, I know self pity's easy when your life has been besieged
And it's easy wishing that there was a way
To rise above the turmoil and live a life of ease
And have your troubles simply melt away.

But should that wish be granted, the danger that exists
Is that your search for wisdom falls apart.
Then when your trip is over you might come to realize
You're no better off than you were at the start.

So it's not that I'm a guru or a sage of brilliant mind,
But of this life I've taken quite a slice.
I've lost enough and bled enough to make me kind of feel
I'm qualified to offer this advice:

Play the hand that's dealt you; play the cards as best you can
And rejoice in all the time Life lets you win.
And then, for all the other times when Life has cut you deep
Sit back and feel the wisdom soaking in.
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 11:31am On Nov 21, 2006
grin i give u gbosa

u tried that more interesting so i need more of Wisdom
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 11:57am On Nov 21, 2006
@ saintsam

I view most of ur post and i found out that u are not romantic and doesnt really care about love

so i decided to make my post plain not just to offend ur mind

If you have, say "Thank God"
Do you know that there are children without what to eat and place to sleep?
So many live in lands lacking peace
Still many more can't even buy what is cheap
And for lack of love many do weep

If you have, say "Thank God"
Many have been the victims of abuse
Others, through domination, have had their life come to no use
In too many parts, people know not freedom
Still brutal conditions drive many to commit the most heinous acts under the sun

If you have, say "Thank God"
Families who can't be together for this and that reason
Families who want to be apart in every season
Children who have to face life alone
On the streets, children with children roam
Many people have to struggle as a cripple
Many, the victims of disaster, can't put their life together
Yes, there are many who know no laughter
IN EVERY THING U DO KEEP SAYING THANK U LORD
FROM CHRISTIANA
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 1:14pm On Nov 21, 2006
Hey Christiana,who told u am not romantic,am a poet,and poet are always romantic,it depends on wats terms u judge romanticism.The only thing about me is that I have never love a girl,am still lookin for that girl that would be able to steal my heart,does that makes me unromantic? or u want me to send some of my love poems,girl am a romantic dude. cheesy

Ur poem touch the inept of my soul,it gave me a reason to thank God.I love poems like this.
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 1:28pm On Nov 21, 2006
hey christiana,this is one of my best love poem.I have posted it in a thread b/4 (POETRY CONTEST), and am postin it again.it kind of long,but enjoy it.


THE PERFECT ROSE




The forge , part 1


On a Wing of Lovers Dreams

Down the Spiral of our mind

Many beauteous Crystal Scenes

Unfold, the Perfect land to find




At Rainbows end the perfect Gems

Create new colours, Never seen

By a Human eye, ne'ere Aeons when

The gods reflect such happenings been




There yonder Heavens marbled Gate

The Womb of precious Gossamer Thread

Wherein the Melt of lovers fate

With God's great heart is truly Wed




The Union of the Sweetness melt

Of all that's Pure in flakes sublime

Love himself in Passion felt

To blend and merge his Hall of Time




So to this Crystal Womb of Light

All that Mankind as Precious knows

To faerie weave in Laughter bright

This one, this only, Perfect Rose




So look upon this Perfect Rose

No words describe, no perfect Prose

Come near the Beauty of this flower

Cast by Love's hand, in Lovers Bower




The loss , part 2




Now we have the Perfect Rose

Graft to Earth by lover's hand

Woven in by Elfen Shews

Of Beauty Bright, to grace the land




And Rose roots in, perfection bright

Blood Hue sights, to Light the world

A World in need, as Humans fight

To possess the Whole that sight unfurled




Greed fuels the mighty, feeds the lance

Produces bombs, in fight for Rose

Obscures, with smoke, the lovers dance

And blasts to bits perfection's pose




Lovers Anger now abate

Just grief at little Root remains

Scattered in bits by Cruel Hate

Love is broken, scattered, pains




War does reign and pain arise

Scattered wide the Rosen bits

Softly salved by Victim sighs

And hidden deep by Brutal Hits




Here in us, a Petal Half

Buried deep, doth Love impart

In hazy Quest to Lover seek

The Petal Half which makes complete




The return , part 3




Man and Woman halfen each

Fallen from the Heavens above

Half a Rose's Petal reach

To touch the Heights of gracious love




Quest on Earth to seek the Other

Halves to meet, complete and whole

Lovesong rise in the Heartbeats flutter

To seek the whole Creation Soul




Jigsaw bits to fit together

Perfect Whole in Love, replete

Lovers call to Be Forever

A perfect marriage, peace complete




Now I have met you, Perfect One

Holder of the other part

Eyes reflects the Gossamer Womb

Where we were forged by Lover's Heart




I see the Teardrop in your eye

Reflect the Pain of World all-round

See children hurt and parent cry

As brutal man does Mercy pound




But joined together we must start

The lovers Peace to World impart

Loveheart healing all world woes

Joined, the Perfect Petals pledge , this

Shining, Lovely, Perfect Rose.
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:04pm On Nov 21, 2006
hey sainstam thats great i love that

Friendship

Friendship is like the breeze,
You can't hold it,
Smell it,
Taste it,
Or know when it's coming,
But you can always feel it,
And you'll always know it's there,
It may come and then go,
But you can know it'll always be back.
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:10pm On Nov 21, 2006
u said earlier that u havent seen the person u Love so out of all girls in ur home forum and even school u havent really see the one u Love.

Why dont u open ur heart and let God leads u dont u know there is a quotes which sates

"When you love someone,
all your saved-up wishes start coming out."
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:18pm On Nov 21, 2006
do u know what flowers stand for mostly roses,

ve u smell the odour of a rose how does it look?
how does its smell?
how does ur heart bit miggle with the flower
thats how love is its like a rose

Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:28pm On Nov 21, 2006
hmmmm,christiana,i see u are a good poet.I said i have never fall in love,i never said i dont have female friends.To tell u the truth,am scared of fallen in love,cuz am scared that my heart my heart be broken,cuz my heart is so dear to me.Am trying to thread softly.A girl dat wanted me to date her even accuse me of being gay,but am not gay,am still lookin 4 dat someone dat would be able to steal my heart.

I wish i can write short poems like u,but my poems are always long.see ya soon
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:36pm On Nov 21, 2006
hey,christiana,u are very romantic oooo,those words of urs and flowers.well i wont say more.
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 10:59am On Nov 23, 2006
nhhhh Who told u am romantic ?
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:05pm On Nov 25, 2006
hey chistiana,am romantic ooooooooooooooooo
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:25pm On Nov 25, 2006
Romantic, did i hear u say u are romantic.
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:34pm On Nov 25, 2006
ok,put me to the test and see how romantic I can be.
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:43pm On Nov 25, 2006
Its a pitty we dont have Judge here, u goin to fail my text
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:59pm On Nov 25, 2006
wats the the test? give me and see if i'm gonna fail
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 4:07pm On Nov 25, 2006
nhhhhhhhhhh, to be honest i just withdraw cause i dont wanna laugh at u
Re: A Wish by watever(f): 4:09pm On Nov 25, 2006
hey christiana, i love your 1st poem, it made me go awwwwwwwwwwwww.  smiley
can i be judge 4 both of u?  cool
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 4:31pm On Nov 25, 2006
yeah wateva,u are welcome to the thread.U CAN BE THE JUDGE.

chistiana,u dont have the guts to stand my romantic wizardry,thats y u back out.Now back in, cuz we've just have a judge
Re: A Wish by watever(f): 4:35pm On Nov 25, 2006
thanx sam kiss. looks like we'r gonna ve 2 postpone d judging cos christy is out sad
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 5:05pm On Nov 25, 2006
hey wateva,u are rite,lets postpone it.I just cant wait.
Re: A Wish by watever(f): 5:11pm On Nov 25, 2006
sorry, but u have to grin
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:06pm On Nov 26, 2006
@ watever

to be realistic i dont think samson can stand me, so samson where are u am on now, ok may be we got to prospone this.
Re: A Wish by watever(f): 4:37pm On Nov 26, 2006
hmmm, so who's better?

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