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A Wish by chistiana(f): 12:16pm On Nov 17, 2006 |
If I could have just one wish, I would wish to wake up everyday to the sound of your breath on my neck, the warmth of your lips on my cheek, the touch of your fingers on my skin, and the feel of your heart beating with mine, Knowing that I could never find that feeling with anyone other than you. From Christiana |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 5:35pm On Nov 19, 2006 |
hey chistiana,dats more than just one wish.U were makin 5 wishes. |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 5:58pm On Nov 19, 2006 |
If I should make a wish,hmmmmmm,wat would i wish,Am still thinking. |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 2:22pm On Nov 20, 2006 |
so think fast am waiting |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 4:24pm On Nov 20, 2006 |
Christiana,am still thinking.Have u listen to R J SONG TITLED 'IF I HAVE ONE WISH'? |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 7:15pm On Nov 20, 2006 |
nope so tell me , whats the one wish is it going to drive ur girl krazy or sweep her off her feet |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 8:45am On Nov 21, 2006 |
u made me laugh,christiana,well if I have one wish,I would wish for wisdom like king solomon in the Bible,I think if I one wisdom,even my Girl friend would benefit frm it. |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 9:10am On Nov 21, 2006 |
hey guy I love that i never knew u differnt from other guys. Thats interesting, and may God grant u that wish. |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 11:27am On Nov 21, 2006 |
Thanks christiana.here is my poem on wisdom. WISDOM Life's simply an adventure , nothing less and nothing more And it's Destiny that starts you that first day. But though your path's been scripted, it's your choices that decide How well you've played the game along the way. And when the journey's over and it's time to mark your score That chronicles the progress that you've gained. It's not the final tally of the wealth that you've amassed Nor all the knowledge that you have attained. It all comes down to wisdom and what you've learned of life And how you've used that wisdom to unlock The doors that hold the answers to the universe and more And let you see the truths that others mock. And not an ounce of wisdom's gained from all the games you've won, Nor from those times you've finished far ahead. It's only gained from lessons learned from all the times you've lost And all those painful moments when you bled. Oh, I know self pity's easy when your life has been besieged And it's easy wishing that there was a way To rise above the turmoil and live a life of ease And have your troubles simply melt away. But should that wish be granted, the danger that exists Is that your search for wisdom falls apart. Then when your trip is over you might come to realize You're no better off than you were at the start. So it's not that I'm a guru or a sage of brilliant mind, But of this life I've taken quite a slice. I've lost enough and bled enough to make me kind of feel I'm qualified to offer this advice: Play the hand that's dealt you; play the cards as best you can And rejoice in all the time Life lets you win. And then, for all the other times when Life has cut you deep Sit back and feel the wisdom soaking in. |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 11:31am On Nov 21, 2006 |
i give u gbosa u tried that more interesting so i need more of Wisdom |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 11:57am On Nov 21, 2006 |
@ saintsam I view most of ur post and i found out that u are not romantic and doesnt really care about love so i decided to make my post plain not just to offend ur mind If you have, say "Thank God" Do you know that there are children without what to eat and place to sleep? So many live in lands lacking peace Still many more can't even buy what is cheap And for lack of love many do weep If you have, say "Thank God" Many have been the victims of abuse Others, through domination, have had their life come to no use In too many parts, people know not freedom Still brutal conditions drive many to commit the most heinous acts under the sun If you have, say "Thank God" Families who can't be together for this and that reason Families who want to be apart in every season Children who have to face life alone On the streets, children with children roam Many people have to struggle as a cripple Many, the victims of disaster, can't put their life together Yes, there are many who know no laughter IN EVERY THING U DO KEEP SAYING THANK U LORD FROM CHRISTIANA |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 1:14pm On Nov 21, 2006 |
Hey Christiana,who told u am not romantic,am a poet,and poet are always romantic,it depends on wats terms u judge romanticism.The only thing about me is that I have never love a girl,am still lookin for that girl that would be able to steal my heart,does that makes me unromantic? or u want me to send some of my love poems,girl am a romantic dude. Ur poem touch the inept of my soul,it gave me a reason to thank God.I love poems like this. |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 1:28pm On Nov 21, 2006 |
hey christiana,this is one of my best love poem.I have posted it in a thread b/4 (POETRY CONTEST), and am postin it again.it kind of long,but enjoy it. THE PERFECT ROSE The forge , part 1 On a Wing of Lovers Dreams Down the Spiral of our mind Many beauteous Crystal Scenes Unfold, the Perfect land to find At Rainbows end the perfect Gems Create new colours, Never seen By a Human eye, ne'ere Aeons when The gods reflect such happenings been There yonder Heavens marbled Gate The Womb of precious Gossamer Thread Wherein the Melt of lovers fate With God's great heart is truly Wed The Union of the Sweetness melt Of all that's Pure in flakes sublime Love himself in Passion felt To blend and merge his Hall of Time So to this Crystal Womb of Light All that Mankind as Precious knows To faerie weave in Laughter bright This one, this only, Perfect Rose So look upon this Perfect Rose No words describe, no perfect Prose Come near the Beauty of this flower Cast by Love's hand, in Lovers Bower The loss , part 2 Now we have the Perfect Rose Graft to Earth by lover's hand Woven in by Elfen Shews Of Beauty Bright, to grace the land And Rose roots in, perfection bright Blood Hue sights, to Light the world A World in need, as Humans fight To possess the Whole that sight unfurled Greed fuels the mighty, feeds the lance Produces bombs, in fight for Rose Obscures, with smoke, the lovers dance And blasts to bits perfection's pose Lovers Anger now abate Just grief at little Root remains Scattered in bits by Cruel Hate Love is broken, scattered, pains War does reign and pain arise Scattered wide the Rosen bits Softly salved by Victim sighs And hidden deep by Brutal Hits Here in us, a Petal Half Buried deep, doth Love impart In hazy Quest to Lover seek The Petal Half which makes complete The return , part 3 Man and Woman halfen each Fallen from the Heavens above Half a Rose's Petal reach To touch the Heights of gracious love Quest on Earth to seek the Other Halves to meet, complete and whole Lovesong rise in the Heartbeats flutter To seek the whole Creation Soul Jigsaw bits to fit together Perfect Whole in Love, replete Lovers call to Be Forever A perfect marriage, peace complete Now I have met you, Perfect One Holder of the other part Eyes reflects the Gossamer Womb Where we were forged by Lover's Heart I see the Teardrop in your eye Reflect the Pain of World all-round See children hurt and parent cry As brutal man does Mercy pound But joined together we must start The lovers Peace to World impart Loveheart healing all world woes Joined, the Perfect Petals pledge , this Shining, Lovely, Perfect Rose. |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:04pm On Nov 21, 2006 |
hey sainstam thats great i love that Friendship Friendship is like the breeze, You can't hold it, Smell it, Taste it, Or know when it's coming, But you can always feel it, And you'll always know it's there, It may come and then go, But you can know it'll always be back. |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:10pm On Nov 21, 2006 |
u said earlier that u havent seen the person u Love so out of all girls in ur home forum and even school u havent really see the one u Love. Why dont u open ur heart and let God leads u dont u know there is a quotes which sates "When you love someone, all your saved-up wishes start coming out." |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:18pm On Nov 21, 2006 |
do u know what flowers stand for mostly roses, ve u smell the odour of a rose how does it look? how does its smell? how does ur heart bit miggle with the flower thats how love is its like a rose
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Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:28pm On Nov 21, 2006 |
hmmmm,christiana,i see u are a good poet.I said i have never fall in love,i never said i dont have female friends.To tell u the truth,am scared of fallen in love,cuz am scared that my heart my heart be broken,cuz my heart is so dear to me.Am trying to thread softly.A girl dat wanted me to date her even accuse me of being gay,but am not gay,am still lookin 4 dat someone dat would be able to steal my heart. I wish i can write short poems like u,but my poems are always long.see ya soon |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:36pm On Nov 21, 2006 |
hey,christiana,u are very romantic oooo,those words of urs and flowers.well i wont say more. |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 10:59am On Nov 23, 2006 |
nhhhh Who told u am romantic ? |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:05pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
hey chistiana,am romantic ooooooooooooooooo |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:25pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
Romantic, did i hear u say u are romantic. |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:34pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
ok,put me to the test and see how romantic I can be. |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:43pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
Its a pitty we dont have Judge here, u goin to fail my text |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 3:59pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
wats the the test? give me and see if i'm gonna fail |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 4:07pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
nhhhhhhhhhh, to be honest i just withdraw cause i dont wanna laugh at u |
Re: A Wish by watever(f): 4:09pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
hey christiana, i love your 1st poem, it made me go awwwwwwwwwwwww. can i be judge 4 both of u? |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 4:31pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
yeah wateva,u are welcome to the thread.U CAN BE THE JUDGE. chistiana,u dont have the guts to stand my romantic wizardry,thats y u back out.Now back in, cuz we've just have a judge |
Re: A Wish by watever(f): 4:35pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
thanx sam . looks like we'r gonna ve 2 postpone d judging cos christy is out |
Re: A Wish by saintsam(m): 5:05pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
hey wateva,u are rite,lets postpone it.I just cant wait. |
Re: A Wish by watever(f): 5:11pm On Nov 25, 2006 |
sorry, but u have to |
Re: A Wish by chistiana(f): 3:06pm On Nov 26, 2006 |
@ watever to be realistic i dont think samson can stand me, so samson where are u am on now, ok may be we got to prospone this. |
Re: A Wish by watever(f): 4:37pm On Nov 26, 2006 |
hmmm, so who's better? |
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