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| Sky by Gamine(op): 5:22pm On Nov 27, 2006 |
Up above in the sky I must admit I felt scared. I havent travelled by air Since last year God, pls keep me in Ur Blood So that no matter whut I'll come out victorious Sharin testimonies of the Great things Uve done for us Descending, even as we reached the airport I thanked God Profusely, cos He kept Us. |
| Re: Sky by RuuDie(m): 3:32pm On Dec 13, 2006 |
gamine, gamine , did u do dis off the top of ur head 2? it's cool, but u still gotta work on the flow , d'u wanna roll or rhyme , and do smthing about the choice of words, some of 'em are way 2 ordinary! later! |
| Re: Sky by Gamine(op): 5:07pm On Dec 15, 2006 |
Ooh thnk u, i wrote in when i was travelling to abuja, the last tym i went gosh , it jst rolled out, i wanted to rhyme, but then i didnt take it too seriously. |