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| My Poem by mzdiverse(f): 6:42pm On May 02, 2008 |
what does anybody think about my poem? please and thanks. Love Does love not make sense Does love make you tense Does love cost few pence WHAT IS LOVE? Does love build you up Does love feel you up could love make you whole WHAT IS THE SHAPE OF LOVE? Is love "I'm sorry" Is love "I care about you" Is love "I cherish you" Would you agree? WHAT WOULD YOU SAY? I argue I agree I disagree I burst into tears Rivers of tears Would you still call it love? Could love still be like doves? L.O.V.E L.O.V.E L.O.V.E WHAT DOES LOVE MEAN TO YOU? Would you agree? WOULD YOU |
| Re: My Poem by aniffy4eva(m): 3:09am On May 03, 2008 |
Irony of life: those who are wise seek love, while those who are in love seek wisdom. i like your poem. . .  |
| Re: My Poem by iice(f): 1:39am On May 04, 2008 |
Put this up in the poem section - you'l get more responses there. |
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