My train of thought is crashing
Poets saying Saw, what happened?
I'm thinking robbery, whatever ways
To make cash, God! I'm blabbing
SARS spoiled the show yesterday
I'm keeping it all bottled up
My baby mama looking at me
Saying Jigs, you look tensed
What's up? I ain't saying nothing
To a female, they do nothing but cry
I'm thinking robbing, I'm high
Feeling like I should go request
Again for the shottie, it's just crossing my mind
Born in a street where you have to shoot guns
To make it, crisis, guys feed off it
Isis, blowing up things, might be
I'm hexed, my hands scramble
Beneath the chair where a knife be
A 1 and half inched dagger
Who'd think this is what my life is
Smoke in the air yet my vision blurred
By anger, frustration, I write this
Letter to my kid brother
In case I don't return, don't bother
To my son: respect your mother
I hear violent knocks
I quenched the blunt on the bed
Sorry for my sister, I'm stressing her
Sprayed the air freshener
Ran to the peephole, then ran back
Threw the dagger in the ceiling
Grabbed the other two parcels
I've planned to smoke when chilling
Threw it into the ceiling
Then straightened up, opened the door
It's the Police!
I wake up




©Jigs

If I didn't know better i'd say you were dropping bars Jigs. Lol.

But nice, seems you were telling a story, would have been nice if you'd wrote the poem in ballad form.

ShaqFu:
If I didn't know better i'd say you were dropping bars Jigs. Lol.

But nice, seems you were telling a story, would have been nice if you'd wrote the poem in ballad form.

i only posted it after convincing myself that it is a poem
I think I know you

JigsawKillah, you only needed some rhymes to complete 12 bars. This is an awesome poem. Are your dreams like this everyday?

llaykorn:
JigsawKillah, you only needed some rhymes to complete 12 bars. This is an awesome poem. Are your dreams like this everyday?

nope

JigsawKillah:



i only posted it after convincing myself that it is a poem
I think I know you

LOL. I wouldn't be surprise if you actually do know me.

JigsawKillah:
My train of thought is crashing Poets saying Saw, what happened? I'm thinking robbery, whatever ways To make cash, God! I'm blabbing SARS spoiled the show yesterday I'm keeping it all bottled up My baby mama looking at me Saying Jigs, you look tensed What's up? I ain't saying nothing To a female, they do nothing but cry I'm thinking robbing, I'm high Feeling like I should go request Again for the shottie, it's just crossing my mind Born in a street where you have to shoot guns To make it, crisis, guys feed off it Isis, blowing up things, might be I'm hexed, my hands scramble Beneath the chair where a knife be A 1 and half inched dagger Who'd think this is what my life is Smoke in the air yet my vision blurred By anger, frustration, I write this Letter to my kid brother In case I don't return, don't bother To my son: respect your mother I hear violent knocks I quenched the blunt on the bed Sorry for my sister, I'm stressing her Sprayed the air freshener Ran to the peephole, then ran back Threw the dagger in the ceiling Grabbed the other two parcels I've planned to smoke when chilling Threw it into the ceiling Then straightened up, opened the door It's the Police! I wake up



©Jigs

This is rap, killer, not poetry.
Like what Ice Cups said in "it was a good day"

PoetryInMotion:


This is rap, killer, not poetry.

Like what Ice Cups said in "it was a good day"

Ice Cube you mean?
is Rap not poetry?

forandy:

Baba is disappointed!
I wee get berra, I pwomise

JigsawKillah:



Ice Cube you mean?
is Rap not poetry?

Yeah, Ice Cube. The stories are alike, sh!t, I have an headache, which facilitates this nonsense I'm spurting. I would reply you when my head is clear.

JigsawKillah:



Baba is disappointed!
I wee get berra, I pwomise

Lol, see u
U dah ayam following your lead

forandy:


Lol, see u
U dah ayam following your lead

what eez wrong wi-me? I am not too dull to Len na, abi?

PoetryInMotion:

Yeah, Ice Cube. The stories are alike, sh!t, I have an headache, which facilitates this nonsense I'm spurting. I would reply you when my head is clear.

sorry. still waiting for that reply lol

JigsawKillah:





sorry. still waiting for that reply lol

Yeah, still not changing my view, sounds like Ice Cube's biggest hit.

PoetryInMotion:


Yeah, still not changing my view, sounds like Ice Cube's biggest hit.

is rap poetry or not?

JigsawKillah:

is rap poetry or not?

Rap is spoken poetry to form music. But both have different depths.

It must have been the hunger
Said the man looking at the mirror
Eyes sunken, throat looks longer

It could have been the garri
Five days without it already
Water is all his body now carry

Where did it all go wrong
He would ponder, palm on chin
It was every election day, all along

It is also because of the masses
Himself inclusive, mindless sheep
With whom leaders wipe their asses

How long would he stay like this
Even though he had decided: not anymore
He approached the rope tied to the ceiling



- Jigs Lionheart

JigsawKillah:
It must have been the hunger
Said the man looking at the mirror
Eyes sunken, throat looks longer

It could have been the garri
Five days without it already
Water is all his body now carry

Where did it all go wrong
He would ponder, palm on chin
It was every election day, all along

It is also because of the masses
Himself inclusive, mindless sheep
With whom leaders wipe their asses

How long would he stay like this
Even though he had decided: not anymore
He approached the rope tied to the ceiling



- Jigs Lionheart

Guy.... There is more to enjoy in this life o.
All this are test of time
E go be Ma 4

harlos:


Guy.... There is more to enjoy in this life o.
All this are test of time
E go be Ma 4

my man! how long has it been?

JigsawKillah:


my man! how long has it been?

So long that I can't remember how to spell your name.
Hope you are staying safe

harlos:

So long that I can't remember how to spell your name.
Hope you are staying safe

Lol yes, bros. How You?

JigsawKillah:


Lol yes, bros. How You?

I'm doing great. Everyone is now busy like never before