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LETTER TO MY UNBORN LAD
dear child,its soothing to know you're up there Know that gives me peace dear
Where do I start from
Its as difficult as filling a blank form
Pls child on your way to earth Go easy on your mum (my heart)
You see child you'll br born into a country called nigeria Which its choice of leadership is poor unlike it sister country algeria
A country where most people move with a frown on their face And the colour of their skin as dark as black lace
Child when you come we'll be doing alot of things together Like borrowing meat free mummys pot together
Cooking every saturday mum breakfast And taking turns to peck her till she wakes up to break her fast
Making up for her whilst she's fast asleep writing love letters for mum and slipping it through an opening in her zip
Switching from picking mummy pimples To sucking her nipples
Loosing mummies hair with care While playing with her ear
Child when you come all this things we'll do Am sure mum is reading this and pulling her hairdo
With this limited words just know a priceless jewel is your worths
This is a letters from a future dad To his unborn lad

wow thumbs up..... wonderful piece

thanks, would soon drop another

aiit, i'll look out 4 it

Quite interesting... Nice work

Nice one... But watch out for your spellings carefully, (it adds quality to your name!). And also your lines, are you using end rhymes, or internal rhymes or you just combining the two? Though i think it would be beautiful if you arrange the lines properly so the end would rhyme. Nice creativity though.