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The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 10:24am On Dec 28, 2016 |
THE DAY I LOST MY VIRGINITY The terrain stain with blood Wound never go out of memory Of the lost of only flower Lost in the garden of ignorant conciousness In the terrain of joy One on one in one aside Gulped in the garden of medium Chained in the ignorant conciousness The garden welcomed. The terrain shaked alot About the tryst of hypocrites Lost in the midst of meager elation. Magneting together like siamese. The auctioner bleep the gong With the bayonet of hell Yelling and grizzling like a baby The joy cannot be compared Even,to the paradise. Oh!sweetness,dont go. The fantasy is enjoyed with emotion. When done is done Temple is desecrated Unpassed road becomes pedestral The done caused done Memory of ages picked the call Of my gone flower that depressed. No panic in new life after dying in The terrain and garden of ignorant conciousness. SUBJECT MATTER: The poet speaker reviews how she was lost in emotion to defile her flower.she highlight the sweetness in having her desire.she howerver acknowledges that the day she lost her prestige will not be out of memory,afterward,she consoles herself not to depress what she lost through sweetness in the garden of ignorant consciousness The terrain stain with blood Wound never go out of memory Of the lost of only flower Lost in the garden of ignorant conciousness Narration:the first stanza shows the consequency of battle,though not war how things have been affected as the terrain(metaphorical meaning of a BED)stained and the consequency will never be erased after something was lost Stanza two:In the terrain of joy One on one in one aside Gulped in the garden of medium Chained in the ignorant conciousness NARRATION:The speaker says that the war is fought by two people,not a popular war and she confirmed that the war is fought in the field of joy what an irony?war in the field of joy STANZA THREE: The garden welcomed. The terrain shaked alot About the tryst of hypocrites Lost in the midst of meager elation. NARRATION:This shows how the garden is very friendly and welcomed the secret meeting of lover that don't forsee the shortcoming STANZA FOUR: Magneting together like siamese. The auctioner bleep the gong With the bayonet of hell Yelling and grizzling like a baby This show how the two lovers were magneted together and the is a sudden noise when somebody is hammering the other one.though the hammered person is complaining,crying,shouting and moaning but the person still has joy despite the suffering STANZA FIVE: The joy cannot be compared Even,to the paradise. Oh!sweetness,dont go. The fantasy is enjoyed with emotion. NARRATION:The oppressed has joy that she even uses exageration that the joy is more than paradise STANZA SIX: When done is done Temple is desecrated Unpassed road becomes pedestral The done caused done. NARRATION:this is sad,because despite all the joy, the oppressed has lost a memmorial prestige.a narrow way become wide STANZA SEVEN: Memory of ages picked the call Of my gone flower that depressed. No panic in new life after dying in The terrain and garden of ignorant conciousness. Narration:speaker says that she can never forget how she lost her prestige,but she comfort herself not to think of it after starting a non virgin life,that partially pleases her @ATAYIS THANK YOU 2 Likes |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 10:22pm On Dec 29, 2016 |
What can u say about the day u lost your flower?don't just read and go |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 9:09am On Dec 30, 2016 |
Title:I AM A RIDDLE
I despise mat
Bed rejects me
I have crossed the Rubicon
Be wilderness is my confidant
The sky yells on me
Hardship reigns over land
Life is darkness
Where am I?
I go back to the mat
I plead,urge and remorse' but
The mat rejects me
I am ejected
Subject matter: The poem highlights how some
people never contented with what in their reach
and vye for impossible mission(stanza 1line
1&2).The popular saying says,'if you run after
two rats,you will definitely miss the two'.The
poet speaker also lament how he has lost the
great chance,finally,he loses everything. |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 3:11pm On Jan 01, 2017 |
My virginity |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 6:14pm On Jan 01, 2017 |
Atayis: |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 8:50pm On Jan 02, 2017 |
Alarm blows,dogs barm,the doom is near |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 5:25pm On Jan 03, 2017 |
Pls,try to comment |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by 1mmanuel(m): 10:12pm On Jan 03, 2017 |
nice poetry. thumbs up |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 10:20pm On Jan 03, 2017 |
Tanx bro |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Tslim404(f): 1:09pm On Jan 05, 2017 |
this is great.wow |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 1:39pm On Jan 05, 2017 |
Thanks for dropping by. Ur comment is also great Tslim404: |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Debbiesmart(f): 2:49pm On Jan 05, 2017 |
NICE |
Re: The Day I Lost My Virginity by Nobody: 2:56pm On Jan 05, 2017 |
Thanks 4 ur lovely comment Debbiesmart: |
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