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As the clock ticks
So with awe my heart beats
Gazing through the window pane
I was captured by the beauty framed
There's the dark-blue sky
Adorned by shiny stars
Over the hill tops
Is the golden heavenly body
Rising with great pride in the east
Oh what wonders will the day bring!?
Conversations roaming my head
Just like the writings on the wall
It's a new beginning
Rings the bell in my being
A new beginning full of hope
And a very bright future

#thollu.

Thollulope:
As the clock ticks So with awe my heart beats Gazing through the window pane I was captured by the beauty framed There's the dark-blue sky Adorned by shiny stars Over the hill tops Is the golden heavenly body Rising with great pride in the east Oh what wonders will the day bring!? Conversations roaming my head Just like the writings on the wall It's a new beginning Rings the bell in my being A new beginning full of hope And a very bright future
#thollu.

very ugly write up,gutter settings,zero rhyme pattern,disjointed.. 0/100. Quit being a disgrace to intelligent writers/poets.. agbero