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First to comment, i guess..
Following... But pls mak it longer

Gee001: I've been following dis thread since it made fp n promised to comment wen it ends. It was more interesting 4rm d beginning n got boring at d end. Ʊ did well cos writing isn't an easy task and I must commend ur effort. Hoping to read the concluding part of ur story cos I believe dis is the first part of it. That notwithstanding, kindly check for grammatical errors in ur next story and pls work on dem. I guess I'll have to un-follow this thread №ω and hoping to read ur next story soon. Tnx for writing dis piece cos it was something I used to and was eager to read whenever I'm bored.

well done my dear. am glad having a beautiful young lady like you reading my stuff.

I sincerely apologies for ending this story without much of what you expected, Am just a novice here writting without skills or having no idea and knowledge concerning literature writing..
I did this little piece of story in order to know if ppl will appreciate my willingness in story writing, and here i've seen many lovers of my story and those who luv me.. Am glad tho.....

But prince promise everyone that he's gonna be awesome when next he starts the new part 2

The rock5555: Bible skul uhhh, come put me naw. Mind u, my online life is different from my day to day life, come see if imy life never change na, i was just teasing him jare.

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Prince i rate this story 7/10. I like how ur grammar improve in ur last ten episodes, i just hope part two go better, nd BTW try to insert emotions and write up into ur next work. One love

nairaland dad, i promise to involve more element and strength in my next story...
But pls mak una stand by me...

Danpersie31: i support law confessor,pls wen are u starting d part 2?d story was on point,it made brains bt u used fire brigade summary 2 finish it

good day sir. Am very sorry to use brigade summary in my last story...

The reall thing will soon come up..

[quote author=Law-confessor]Thanks & Weldone kiddo, i really enjoyed ur piece.
When is part II coming up?[/quote]hmmmm. Just very soon my dear and i promise to put more fire....

Watch out..

timota: . Rock ,the preacher's son so you are encouraging him to bleep don't you know that inem udia asaha ye afana ekong(sweet food comes with it's own problem) when will repent don't you know that you are suppose to be in bible school by now.Try and reshape your life this year

good morning sir...
Thanks for your advices about my nl father...

I wish i wanted sleeping with them, i would have done that long time ago but i decided passing all temptations...

Well, this story hasn't started yet 0oo. Dis is just the genesis

linpok: waoh!!!! So its finally over....Prince thank u very much for dis piece of writing.I know u hav more interesting stories to tell and I will definiteli be here to read nd folow any new work from U.... Fire On

thanks my oga for all your compliments.

Perhaps, this story hasn't started. Where i ended leads to another section and thats why i titled "MY COMPLICATED LUV STORY WITH MY SCHOOL MUM."

but some ppl no just wan understand...

[quote author=Little-flicky]Wow, nice write up... Buh dat guy deserve more dan 3blow's mayb a broken head 4his silly mouth.... Thumb's up swthrt and am waiting 4ur next story.....@360prince
I missed ur presence datz y i actually disappeared@Linpok, hope u are fine bestie[/quote]thanks my dear...
Welcome back to prince world...

Na mugu elisah be.. The guy wan put me inside wahala..

This story hasn't started yet.. Ppl are just complaining how i f up..

linpok: Lol! Mayb dem don go bak to school

better call them come because na them go guard me as i look forward to write the main topic which would relate to my story

Ephyartz: Nice work. Bt trust me dis story z not an autobiography,2 many lies,sleepn in uduak rooms witout touchn her,same goes 4 grace. Ah! Are u impotent. D story was rili ntrstn at d begining bt it only got more boring. No sensible suspense.I stopped reading wen u were wasting time explaining ur 3 days fast. Only jumped 2 d last page now bt honestly u av done a gud job bcoz e no easy to write storx o.

good day sir...
I appreciate your comments and i know your expectations, but to be serious this story hasn't started yet... I ended this particular section because there is a complicated luv story ahead and more about miss Grace..
Meanwhile, this story isn't love only but it involves me...

Be patient....( patient dogs eat the fattest bone*na so proverbs talk*)

ablekingdon: prince what of mrs Grace, precious and Emeka? And what happened while u went 2 ur Aunt place. When next are u realsing d part 2 0f ur Story, becus I will luv 2 read it. Bck 2 my question does it mean dat u are still a virgin up0n all d break light mrs grace showed 2 u 2 fu*k her. Did u later meet Anoda gal while in ur Aunty place. And pls tell me d name 0f ur stoooory.

am glad am capitalized with V...

Many things happen when i finally settled with my auntY....

UltimateJoseph: Nice write up Prince, you have been able to to successfully hold your audience expectaions high from the begining till the end as many are looking forward to bleeping instances in the story. Once again gud work, more ink 2 ur pen!

thanks for reading and thanks for your time spent...

This story had alot of sex lines but i excluded them .... I didnt want this story to go far...

philtrum: wow.... more strength bro

my big oga. Thanks for exercising patience while reading this story...

Thanks man...

IamDejman: This story rating by me is 3/10...It was interesting at the beginning that even made it make fp but 360prince just kept on making it less interesting save for d update that he caught d trio. Bad end bro

all the same thanks my brother reading....

I didnt wanna make this particular piece of work long, thats why i excluded some sex part..

timota: As the story ends there are lessons for us to learn from it .1 The power of prayer actually manifested in the story .2 You are meant to serve God that why he delivered you if not you would be in jail for murder but God adverted it or Elijah people could have killed you before they realise that their son is not dead.3 You have a great destiny and the enemy wants to destroy it through women so you should join a strong church like mountain of fire for total deliverance.4. Your people too could be manipulating some things so as to eliminate you but it is your mother's intecession that is keeping you. For counselling call this no 08061171731.ku unie mfine ke ubok Abasi mmodo mme afo.

thanks my brother you are seeing exactly what i wanted ppl to mention....

My story had so many sex part but i decide excluding some....

Peter pan: Wow the story finally ends... Though from the text I'll say it's an autobiography. But anyways good job.
Nice ending.
Personally I'll give you 6/10.
Keep it up.
And lest I forget, happy new year

thanks for your time spent reading this story....

I promise when next i write my marks will be 10/10

RexioKlasik: Wow! This is awesome,at the end of the story,it makes meaning,but still the topic doesnt really tally,so next tym watch awt for it. I am very Impressed and Proud of u ma broda. We hopin to see more of u.

thanks my brother.
when next i don learn how to bang girlsmy story go happened with fire which would certainly agree with the topic

AOR D MAYOR: Well Good story anyway. But ur title was far from what ur story entails.

i certainly agree with you....

Les: your story is interesting much, I love and I,rate it four star. But your title is misleading, this is your autobiography and not a love story. Nothing peculiar happened between you and grace. So who gave uduak the gift na??/img]

menn i dont wanna explain everything that happened b/w me and Miss Grace, or if i go any further this story wont end here.

Uduak walker walker when her eyes shines and she go get belle. I dont really know who get her the pregnant..

I keep my secret. in my heart...

The rock5555: Type fast jare before i come back.

BTW ur pix is hot, y u come tall pass ur papa na how old are u now?
Shebi u no be V again ba? If i no see bleeping action for part two eh, u go hear am

thanks my daddy...

I be correct shot boy but tall in pix.

As for the fucking side, mak we see wetin happen...

giles14: absolute nonsence in short u b Bleep up

pls enlighten us about what you mean. Whats wrong?

Les: Is Elisha dead now?? Since then, have you met grace, uduak or precious and when did you finally start having sex or abi you still be virgin??

+ elisah still de alive. I heard that he his now in lagos.

+As for uduak, precious, and emeka i dont know about them anymore. I was reported that uduak is now "mama gift"

+ concerning your virgin stuff, am one of a kind.....

ablekingdon: Prince prince hw many tyms I dn call u, if I count 3 eh, u g0 kum bck here kum finish watn u start. See as u just d hang me. Any way shaaa ur st0ry mk sense. Die

oga na 3times you call my name...

Like moses in the bible "** yes... I, am..am heeeere..*"

tory don finish... "crying"

***CONTINUATION***


few moments later as i relaxed on the stair thinking about what happened in principal office, Elisah walkout from the classroom when he sighted me sitting alone.
He began to barrage his silly utterances in my hears, while his friends clapped their hands. I immediately stood up and caution him and his friends with calm approach, but when i warned them the more they rendered abusive words on me.

"Your papa left breastttt...Pray to God that i shouldn't catch you because if i do, am gonna break your silly big head." i uttered after chasing them.


"Prince i guess you're capable of pregnantin the whole students in school, thats what you're."
"Prince i never knew you be dickk head."
Elisah mentioned and ran for his escaped


I gradually began to plan for perfect way of harming them as i sat gazing towards miss Grace hostel block. That afternoon temperature was excessively hot, my head was also touching bad.
I quickly jolted to my feet when i sighted Grace comin towards my direction. I guess she wasn't happy about what i claimed to see about her and henry.
Before Grace could advance closely i left her and swiftly entered the noisy classroom.
Since that moment i never met Grace, precious, Emeka and Uduak because they were instantly driven out from my heart.

I was sitting at the extreme corner desk in the classroom when Elisah entered into the class, before i sighted him coming in the varanda, i rightly predicted what he would do if he sees me.
Elisah began to pronounced provokin words which made me angry,while other students encouraged and supported him. Yet,i couldn't allowed my hot temper to instantly show. Many thoughts filled my head, when everyone started repeating the "ebe mma econs" which simply means " husband of madam econs" Elisah shouted same while jumping around the classroom ,But when i couldn't withstand them again i moved closer to Elisah and held him tight, straight his face while i released pouches on his face.


"I think that 3 blows should be enough for you. Idiottttt boy." i uttered and walked away from him to sit at my desk.


When i slammed my ass down on the desk students surrounded him. Students started laughing and when i heard the students screamed out louder, i reluctantly decided checking but when i gazed towards their directions i found out that Elisah was smilin with his mouth wide opened. Elisah smiled for 5 minutes before putting his right hand in his mouth and brought out two big broken teeth. Lateron his smiling became worst when he fell on the hard floor still smiling,and bleeding.


"Guy stand up, if you like the blow just recieve another one from Prince." one of his friends instructed and students laughed at his friend dry joke.


Before i could looked left and my right all the students ran out from the classroom shouting " Prince don kill somebody o0o0". When i heard them shouted concerning Elisah dying my hunger vanished immediately.

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Na who wan hungry again after hearing dat kind tin?
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From where i stand, i wasn't on earth anymore because i'd fainted where i stood
.The news reached Elisah parents place, and his elder brothers invaded the school compound with axes, matchets, sticks, bottles.
When they infiltrated the school premises my principal kept me in refuge untill when they rushed Elisah to the nearby hospital.

I remain in principals detention untill when Miss Grace came around to checkup on me. She informed me that Elisah's predicament wasn't my personal fault. Grace reported that after they might have taken Elisah to the nearby hospital the doctors confirmed that they had no idea and that nothing was wrong with him physically.

Perhaps, By that late moment by 5:00pm in the evening, they transfered Elisah from the hospital to the church. Prayer warriors assembled and barraged many payer points.
So they told me.....


"then why did Elisah died in my hands?" i asked with fears in my heart. Tears rolled down my checks.


Grace apologied about what she did wrong against me, even Precious, Emeka Uduak sympathized with me as well.
Lateron my principal entered and informed us concernin Elisah's illness.
He informed us that Elisah's dead was plann by his wicked father and that His father was a native doctor who uses all his male children to perform rituals.
Meanwhile, the principal concluded that after praying for five good hours in the church, Elisah jolted up and began to confessed how his eldest brother appeared to take him to the land of dead.

Elisah's confessions brought me out from being guilty. The next months my mother option that i should settle with my aunty.
Thats how i manage to leave the school, i left my lovely friends, left my mother too because Elisah's parent extort money from my mother, pretending to use the money for Elisah treatments. I vacated my own environment and finally settled down with my aunty.


**THE. .END**

***CONTINUATION***


few moments later as i relaxed on the stair thinking about what happened in principal office, Elisah walkout from the classroom when he sighted me sitting alone.
He began to barrage his silly utterances in my hears, while his friends clapped their hands. I immediately stood up and caution him and his friends with calm approach, but when i warned them the more they rendered abusive words on me.

"Your papa left breasttttt...Pray to God that i shouldn't catch you because if i do, am gonna break your silly big head." i uttered after chasing them.

"Prince i guess you're capable of pregnantin the whole students in school, thats what you're."
"Prince i never knew you be dickk head."
Elisah mentioned and ran for his escaped.

I gradually began to plan for perfect way of harming them as i sat gazing towards miss Grace hostel block. That afternoon temperature was excessively hot, my head was also touching bad.
I quickly jolted to my feet when i sighted Grace comin towards my direction. I guess she wasn't happy about what i claimed to see about her and henry.
Before Grace could advance closely i left her and swiftly entered the noisy classroom.
Since that moment i never met Grace, precious, Emeka and Uduak because they were instantly driven out from my heart.

I was sitting at the extreme corner desk in the classroom when Elisah entered into the class, before i sighted him coming in the varanda, i rightly predicted what he would do if he sees me.
Elisah began to pronounced provokin words which made me angry,while other students encouraged and supported him. Yet,i couldn't allowed my hot temper to instantly show. Many thoughts filled my head, when everyone started repeating the "ebe mma econs" which simply means " husband of madam econs" Elisah shouted same while jumping around the classroom ,But when i couldn't withstand them again i moved closer to Elisah and held him tight, straight his face while i released pouches on his face.

"I think that 3 blows should be enough for you. Idiottttt boy." i uttered and walked away from him to sit at my desk.

When i slammed my ass down on the desk students surrounded him. Students started laughing and when i heard the students screamed out louder, i reluctantly decided checking but when i gazed towards their directions i found out that Elisah was smilin with his mouth wide opened. Elisah smiled for 5 minutes before putting his right hand in his mouth and brought out two big broken teeth. Lateron his smiling became worst when he fell on the hard floor still smiling,and bleeding.

"Guy stand up, if you like the blow just recieve another one from Prince." one of his friends instructed and students laughed at his friend dry joke.

Before i could looked left and my right all the students ran out from the classroom shouting " Prince don kill somebody o0o0". When i heard them shout, my hunger vanished immediately.
________________________
Na who wan hungry again for dat kind tin?
________________________

From where i stand, i wasn't on earth anymore because i'd fainted where i stood
.The news reached Elisah parents place, and his elder brothers invaded the school compound with axes, matchets, sticks, bottles.
When they infiltrated the school premises my principal kept me in refuge untill when they rushed Elisah to the nearby hospital.

I remain in principals detention untill when Miss Grace came around to checkup on me. She informed me that Elisah's predicament wasn't my personal fault. Grace reported that after they might have taken Elisah to the nearby hospital the doctors confirmed that they had no idea and that nothing was wrong with him physically.

Perhaps, By that late moment by 5:00pm in the evening, they transfered Elisah from the hospital to the church. Prayer warriors assembled and barraged many points, so they told me.

"then why did Elisah died in my hands?" i asked with fears in my heart. Tears rolled down my checks.

Grace apologied about what she did wrong against me, even Precious, Emeka Uduak sympathized with me as well.
Lateron my principal entered and informed us concernin Elisah's illness.
He informed us that Elisah's dead was plann by his wicked father and that His father was a native doctor who uses all his male children to perform rituals.
Meanwhile, the principal concluded that after praying for five good hours in the church, Elisah jolted up and began to confessed how his eldest brother appeared to take him to the land of dead.

Elisah's confessions brought me out from being guilty. The next months my mother option that i should settle with my aunty.
Thats how i manage to leave the school, i left my lovely friends, left my mother too because Elisah's parent extort money from my mother, pretending to use the money for Elisah treatments. I vacated my own environment and finally settled down with my aunty.


**THE. .END**

Oga, wishing you happy new year and God's Protection....

I've been silent for quite a long time now, but today i decided commenting on your story....

Thumps up my brother.

Typing...

The rock5555: Na zobo u suppose drink ooo, beta leave that alomo

dad you know say na alomo de mak me see wella, so mak i use small.

feed us moreeeeeeeee *vampire voice*

tochstorm: strolled by.

menn where have you been hiding ?

chinedumo: so u affair with grace is dat open?
D principal could have heard it?

Nawah for u.
So everybody knows all d females u have?
Now dey use it to mock u.

It is possible that all ur babes knew u were seeing each oda.

they knew i had relationship with her.

norkses: Alright let's do this! Bring its on menh!

alright sir...