write2obi:
hope kee just tell me the venue, Lemmie got and sweep there

adegwurulez: you know say na fiction na, if u make am unnecessarily long, e go dey boring

globatop: Thank God. suspense over. I appreciate Ur inspiration, I nominate u for Nobel Laurette.

Sexy Sapphire:

Well.......I used to write wen I was younger buh stopped later cos of my schedules. I think am alredi gettin motivated by som stories on NL. Will soon put pen to paper

lbotus: Thanks ADE. Compliments of the season

Uthman51: Wat pain me most is jeo's death...keep d good work bro,GOD bless You

Clemzy16: ....and finally the short story has ended. Bruv you're an embodiment of talent. I like the fact that you were able to write something totally different from how you started. My story also ended yesterday and until next year before i'll start another one. May God grant us more and more wisdom. Peace!!

Clemzy16: Bros you should know there is nothing to be corrected, if not we would have bombarded you with critique or perhaps constructive criticism. You're one of a kind.

360prince: . Oga na true you the talk so 00oo

sha, me still the front seat with sobo and donot, sipping slow while waiting on your next update..

adegwurulez: oya i want to hear all your constructive criticisms. say ur mind o, without fear or favour

oloyedayo: This one suppose return o.

chade: God go make u bigger nd better dan dis amen......i love every bit of d story though u broke my heart wer jimmy died.
U r mouthed

walexyll:


Firstly, I must commend that you are damn good and very talented.
That being said, I notice that you always try to create a lot of suspense in your story which is very cool, however, you always fail to conclude and tie up all loose ends in your story. For instance, here, you insinuated that the invisible quartet contains 5 members and there is a reason for them being called the invisible quartet. You decided to keep the identity of the fifth person and the reason for the name to yourself.
You did something similar in the "life of a UAM boy" when you failed to tell us about how Amaka and Kelvin eneded their love.....My 2kobo: When you want to write the final chapter of your story, read your entire story all over again and put down all major events and characters to ensure that you conclude on their ending

Once more good one bro

walexyll:


Firstly, I must commend that you are damn good and very talented.
That being said, I notice that you always try to create a lot of suspense in your story which is very cool, however, you always fail to conclude and tie up all loose ends in your story. For instance, here, you insinuated that the invisible quartet contains 5 members and there is a reason for them being called the invisible quartet. You decided to keep the identity of the fifth person and the reason for the name to yourself.
You did something similar in the "life of a UAM boy" when you failed to tell us about how Amaka and Kelvin eneded their love.....My 2kobo: When you want to write the final chapter of your story, read your entire story all over again and put down all major events and characters to ensure that you conclude on their ending

Once more good one bro

The rock5555: Bro abeg check ur mail. I don PM u ur xmas bonanza . Am sorry if it took long.

C'est moi:
Just coming after party don finish.Excellent piece,ade.I enjoyed reading your write-up.Thumbs up!

Bonny baby: Thumb up Ade, u ar d best; i enjoyed every bit of d story wella; expecting more because i see a gr8 writter in u

adegwurulez: knock!! knock!! Anybody still here? Wishing you guys happy new year! And remember, ADEGWU is coming back stronger this year.

PrinceAdepoju: MERRY NEW YEAR!
https://www.nairaland.com/1576051/nigerians-new-year#20594045

dammygoody: *opens the door*Oga Adegwu!!!!I wish you the same oooooh............waiting for stronger ADEGWU............

The rock5555: Bro abeg check ur mail. I don PM u ur xmas bonanza . Am sorry if it took long.

ritababe:

you better go PM my own

@ade everybody just dey pray for you, na wa oh share some of the prayer for me na.

Anyway GOD GO SHOWER US WITH HIS BLESSING THIS YEAR IN JESUS NAME

emma_best2000: Ade you are bomb

360prince: Oga, wishing you happy new year and God's Protection....

I've been silent for quite a long time now, but today i decided commenting on your story....

Thumps up my brother.