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Honey, You've Come When I'm Hot by Ornez(f): 7:18am On Apr 25, 2017 |
Honey, you've come when I'm Hot knocking on my door like an angry soldier yesterday you passed without even a wink your glowing masculinity placed in face your shirtless bod' visits my dreams now you've come to knock on my door your lips so full and red for your beautiful dark self honey, I know I'm with another honey, I know another owns you but honey you've come when I'm Hot surely you can't leave me in a hurry I've had you several times in my mind but right now in my rivers you must swim come in honey and lock the door my lover is away tonight you're my dinner honey, you've come when i'm Hot sure you must delay in returning. |
Re: Honey, You've Come When I'm Hot by baylord101(m): 7:25am On Apr 25, 2017 |
You call this poem? |
Re: Honey, You've Come When I'm Hot by jaykorey(f): 9:34am On Apr 25, 2017 |
loool |
Re: Honey, You've Come When I'm Hot by Ornez(f): 1:38pm On Apr 25, 2017 |
if u're talking about d arrangement of the lines and the piece...it appears difficult to do with my phone...if u're talking about diction...there's nothing wrong with a simple free verse. otherwise...maybe u're d one who doesn't know what poetry is. |
Re: Honey, You've Come When I'm Hot by baylord101(m): 5:44pm On Apr 25, 2017 |
Ornez:You can check my topics and comment back who doesn't know knw what poem is #Thanks |
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