itwould be if you just continue...

Apt

Sirme411:
itwould be if you just continue...

Nope. I did what i wanted to do. That's the end.

albacete:
Apt

Thanks.

True, once there is life there is hope. Good job

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uniquebee:
True, once there is life there is hope. Good job

Yup. Thanks.

@ Kayo80 nice writeup.. keep it up

bakeuhappy:
@ Kayo80 nice writeup.. keep it up

Thank you.

Simple, short Nd interesting

queenitee:
Simple, short Nd interesting

Thank you.

I've been reading quite a lot of your stories since I stumbled on the casting thread by divepen yesterday, I'm a literature aficionados and I have a very high taste trust me, so you are Good for me to have been held spell bound by your work. You can improve though, but I love your plots mostly and the choice of words too, simple and converying.

Keep it up Kay

wizard007:
I've been reading quite a lot of your stories since I stumbled on the casting thread by divepen yesterday, I'm a literature aficionados and I have a very high taste trust me, so you are Good for me to have been held spell bound by your work. You can improve though, but I love your plots mostly and the choice of words too, simple and converying.

Keep it up Kay

Thanks for this comment. And yea, i know i have to improve in some areas of my writing, but i am glad to hear you talk about liking my plots best...that has always been my area of strength. Thanks.

kayo80:


Thanks for this comment. And yea, i know i have to improve in some areas of my writing, but i am glad to hear you talk about liking my plots best...that has always been my area of strength. Thanks.

I'm glad you knew it's your strength, I've read all the work of the best writers around here, most develops along the line, but my experience with your art is top notch from get go, work more on your weakness and try your hands on a novel, something long, you can do it!

wizard007:


I'm glad you knew it's your strength, I've read all the work of the best writers around here, most develops along the line, but my experience with your art is top notch from get go, work more on your weakness and try your hands on a novel, something long, you can do it!

Thanks. I will work on that.