I ACTUALLY MADE THE BEAT
HERE IS THE DOWNLOAD http://www.plunder.com/benjamz-download-467f0fb266.htm.
and this one :
http://www.plunder.com/benjamz-download-1000929ff4.htm

Right, overall an okay attempt.

Here are my issues. The beat is disjointed. It feels like different parts was layered with the main beat in an attempt to make it sound longer and varied.

It feels like you have the main melody, but other parts bolted on it.

It is a little bit repetitive for my liking and the drum roll isn't really doing much. I.e it is used to introduced a new verse, chorus etc but it is not so on this track.


Nice attempt, but room for improvement.

NNONAH THIS IS OFOKA , WHERE HAVE U BEEN ? U NOR SEE ME ON FACEBOOK?

ElRazur:

Right, overall an okay attempt.

Here are my issues. The beat is disjointed.

THERE WE GO AGAIN MR EL RAZUR MR LOUD MOUTHED.

have u listened to benjamz violin beat wit a vocal on it, the guy that rapped murdered the beat . and you are complaining, ben carry go jare. huhun, whats the name of the guy that rapped on the violin beat ben.?

Can we please not derail this thread. There is time for play and time to be serious. Please. Thanks.

ElRazur:

Can we please not derail this thread. There is time for play and time to be serious. Please. Thanks.

na u be MOD? when did u suddenly stop derailing, am still talking about the topic mr oversabi.

besides el razur did not u notice there are 2 beats nnonah posted , listen to  the first one . i know u skipped it because u wan yab ofoka.

@EL thanks for the critics
@ofoka thanks alot too. the guy that rapped is ma home boi his name is RAPPON while the guy with the hook is 3ga


@OFOKA av been around since but busy schedules and low internet connectivity av been putting me off meanwhile i couldn't find you on facebook.
there's this other thread i posted please still comment cos for me i think the beat murdered the guy on that track.
piss y'all

nnonah111:

@EL thanks for the critics
@ofoka thanks alot too. the guy that rapped is ma home boi his name is RAPPON while the guy with the hook is 3ga


@OFOKA av been around since but busy schedules and low internet connectivity av been putting me off meanwhile i couldn't find you on facebook.
there's this other thread i posted please still comment cos for me i think the beat murdered the guy on that track.
piss y'all

ok i got u send ur addy to punchlinee@gmail.com i will mail u str8

Someone should put a vocal on this

nnonah111:

Someone should put a vocal on this

krayola is the resident vocal master, i will tell him on facebook.

nnonah . . .

The beat aint smooth! u used a few instruments and it doesnt even sound right. . .
Even Krayola would not waste his bars on this

lalaboi:

nnonah . . .

The beat aint smooth! u used a few instruments and it doesnt even sound right. . .
Even Krayola would not waste his bars on this

why the evil laughter??

there are 2 beats in benjams post, the other one is good enuff for krayola to flow on , i have a feeling krayola will murder the beat .let krayola come thru with his opinion.

Krayola waitn 4 u 2freestyle on any of d beat.or should i upload another beat?i have a lot of them.
@ofoka u'r great,

Alright i did d 2nd beat when i was getting used to fl.but am talking about the second link posted there[
http//:plunder.com/benjamz-download-467fofb266.htm.]

dont worry nnonnah krayola will definitely spit to this beat . he will make u famous in 5 minutes , make i call am .

besides where is my favourite nairaland junior brother el razur !!?

yo nnonanh i have shown krayola ur beat , give him small time , he will spit on it soon when he is less busy. k?

Yeah! Dats ofoka d greatest.@kryola i believe u die. u can just choose between d sexy love beat,the one dat ofoka gave u d link and this:
www.plunder.com/benjamz-download-467f0fb266.htm
guess dis is much ok for rap. jst copy and paste d link in ur address bar 2download it.
ofoka thanks alot ok.

nnonah111:

Yeah! Dats ofoka d greatest. the one dat ofoka gave u
ofoka thanks a lot ok.

yeah man, i got ur back all day everyday dawg

Yeah! Dats ofoka d greatest.@kryola i believe u die.
U just gat 2choose between d sexy love beat,d one that ofoka gave u d link and this one : www.plunder.com/benjamz-download-467f0fb266.htm   i guess this is more ok for a rap.wel,left 4u to choose whis is beta 4u 2 work wit.
Thank y'all one more tym.

I liked both links I heard so far, it has almost an old style rock guitar to it although I assume it's an electric keyboard. Oh well what can I say I am Canadian!! but like the beats very much!!

@jenna thanks.am glad u like d beat.
@kryola whats up. Whats delayn.

Kryola WHATS STIL HOLDING?

@uploader
Why you like to exclude people wey dey use phone dey download? Can't you upload it to site that do not count? ( I recommend sharemobile.ro )
i beg. Just upload some of your free work there for low profiled guys

Sorry but Now i knw kryola gat nofin 2rap.