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Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by JigsawKillah(m): 2:32pm On Oct 28, 2017 |
Immune to the pains of heartbreak; I prided myself Weed would take it all away, I lied to myself My emotions drown me in waves, I'm crying for help I died and was reborn: a psycho you'd create Went on a heartbreaking spree, never felt remorse Till it became more of an habit, then I fell in love Couldn't tell her how I feel, fear I'd treat her worse I am an emotionless robot, a psycho you'd made Early morning sex, that's a nice day Heavy drugs we wrecks, sticking my vein Then we clubbing next, every Friday Look at how I become, the psycho you'd craved Never been this angry in ages, I sought out to rob Hanging with the meanest faces, so I could feel among Wasted and making people wasted, I don't feel it's wrong As I wear this balaclava, I hope the psycho would fade I picture the one I love, I am unworthy of her I stay frowning like a job; her strength is her smile I'm a destructive meteor; she radiates as a star If you ever read this, I'm a psycho you'd changed ©Jigs 38 Likes 5 Shares |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by purples25(f): 12:44pm On Oct 30, 2017 |
Poetry , music , life. I should be allowed to say poetic justice 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by noble4d(m): 9:24pm On Nov 18, 2017 |
JigsawKillah: This is awesome Bro 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Turks: 6:41pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
The Title of this piece reminds me of 50cent’s album. Nice piece though. 1 Like |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Starkid3010(m): 6:42pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
A |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by princesweetman2(m): 6:42pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Fantastic |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Nobody: 6:47pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Give me 5 reasons why I should admit this comprehension passage is a poem and I will give you 10 reasons why it isn't. 1 Like |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by gsainttrinity(m): 6:47pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Nice one there.. Analysis: So themes are about love and heartbreak drugs and addiction. |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by tthewop(m): 6:49pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by teelaw4life(m): 6:49pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Nice lines...feels like rap bars though. |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Threebear(m): 6:49pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Let's go back to the days, when people with talent actually did art. Now everyone is a writer and poet and it's absolutely appalling, the lack of talents on display. 3 Likes |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by romoruyi(m): 6:51pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
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Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Nobody: 7:03pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
An admixture of rap and poetry. |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by MaconAwire(m): 7:09pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
NICE CONSTRUCT..... mr intelligent psycho |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by JhyMedex: 7:11pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Biutiful!! |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Nobody: 7:15pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Nice lines there bro.. .but you can do better! |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by HARDLABOR: 7:20pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Who don watch the film by 50cent? |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by jojothegreat(m): 7:35pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
This is a great piece! |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Phaysal: 7:45pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Last last dis guy try o |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Nobody: 8:03pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
JigsawKillah: 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by CaptainFM1: 8:13pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Threebear: Please share a piece u've composed! 1 Like |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by phpfx(m): 9:16pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
dope...nice rhymes.. |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Manofvalor1: 9:23pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Sorry this is no poem.nice construction but it lacks poetric devices. |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by rossychik(f): 9:32pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
me like |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Bamibor: 9:36pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
JigsawKillah: Thumbs up to you...the message was lucid and the tone quite compelling. Don't stop writing and don't quit on that fight to be better, to do better. Thanks to the mods too for finally giving a voice to creativity, in form of poetry by moving this to the front page. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Before I Self Destruct (psycho) by Bamibor: 9:40pm On Nov 20, 2017 |
Manofvalor1: Every poem may not always satisfy the strict standards of poetry and the use of poetic devices. Many who write poetry have never had a formal training nor studied it (whether in school or a self-thought discipline). For most, it's just a way of expressing their creative side and that should be encouraged. Cheers! 3 Likes 1 Share |
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