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Poem: Under The Rain By Soibi Ransom ( Daily Memoirs by Dailymemoirs: 10:37am On May 11, 2018 |
By Soibi Polymath ( The Chief Poet To my Bestie With joy in my heart With ecstasy in my soul My brain jerking endorphin Under the rain I searched for you My body drenched My clothes needing a squeeze My ears with drippings My eyes crying a river Under the rain Under the fierce blowing wind Under the rumbling thunders Lightning illuminating my way Under the short term streams on my path Your voice echoing in my heart Your spectacles reflecting like a mirror Your shining white teeth got me smiling too Under the rain without an umbrella Under the rain I stood My chest cold like ice Battered by heavenly showers Under the rain I could wait a hundred years just to see you my bestie Please rate my Poem on the scale of 1-10 Culled from Soibi Ransom's Book The Encyclopedia of Love Episode 1 Chapter 9 being Serialized Soibi Ransom is Daily Memoirs Chief Writer.
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Re: Poem: Under The Rain By Soibi Ransom ( Daily Memoirs by Nobody: 11:17am On May 11, 2018 |
Plenty of spelling errors. Easily avoidable. The brevity of your talent is enhanced by your impatience in writing. Take time. Literally. 1 Like |
Re: Poem: Under The Rain By Soibi Ransom ( Daily Memoirs by AvatarMode(m): 12:11pm On May 11, 2018 |
Nice work... 1 Like |
Re: Poem: Under The Rain By Soibi Ransom ( Daily Memoirs by Dailymemoirs: 12:29pm On May 11, 2018 |
TarOrfeek: noted |
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