spin gold[b]spin gold[/b]spin gold I want to spin gold out of my life
people make out silver,others wood but I want to spin gold out of my life
wares may be heavy,others light but I want mine golden whether heavy or light
health may be good, for others bad but I want mine golden
wealth may be scanty,for others plenty but I want mine in gold bars
family may be sweet,for others sour but I want mine golden
smiles may be real,for others masked but I want mine golden
yesterday was not golden I was mining
today is not golden I am still refining
but tommorrow. Yes, this next day has to be golden
if the refinery does not stop ..hmmmmmmm
then, I will spin gold as smiles I will spin gold as wares i will spin gold as wealth I will spin gold as family indeed,i will spin gold as HEALTH
I will glitter I will shine I will be refined I will be beautiful
because I am made of Gold because I spun gold out of my life.

Are you sure you are not taking about Goldberg? Nice poem btw

Perspectives:
Are you sure you are not taking about Goldberg? Nice poem btw

smiles.not goldberg oo..thanks for the comment.I am new in the field and corrections will be appreciated..

selfwife:
smiles.not goldberg oo..thanks for the comment.I am new in the field and corrections will be appreciated..

It's a very nice poem. Great poems always have diverse meanings to different readerrs. It's good.

If I may ask, what inspired this poem?

Perspectives:


It's a very nice poem. Great poems always have diverse meanings to different readerrs. It's good.

If I may ask, what inspired this poem?

had clinical depression and suicide was always an option but I always managed to pull through that stage.and whenever I ask myself what I really want in life,the answer was never money nor things money can buy.It was always beyond it.so i told myself I am going to spin gold out of my life...gold here doesnt mean the usual gold.it means values that can not be weighed or measured.thanks.

selfwife:
had clinical depression and suicide was always an option but I always managed to pull through that stage.and whenever I ask myself what I really want in life,the answer was never money nor things money can buy.It was always beyond it.so i told myself I am going to spin gold out of my life...gold here doesnt mean the usual gold.it means values that can not be weighed or measured.thanks.

I understand.

The bolded part is really deep. Very few have been there.

selfwife:
spin gold[b]spin gold[/b]spin gold
I want to spin gold out of my life

people make out silver,others wood but
I want to spin gold out of my life

wares may be heavy,others light but
I want mine golden whether heavy or light

health may be good, for others bad but
I want mine golden

wealth may be scanty,for others plenty but
I want mine in gold bars

family may be sweet,for others sour but
I want mine golden

smiles may be real,for others masked but
I want mine golden

yesterday was not golden
I was mining

today is not golden
I am still refining

but tommorrow. Yes, this next day
has to be golden

if the refinery does not stop ..hmmmmmmm

then, I will spin gold as smiles
I will spin gold as wares
i will spin gold as wealth
I will spin gold as family
indeed,i will spin gold as HEALTH

I will glitter
I will shine
I will be refined
I will be beautiful

because I am made of Gold
because I spun gold out of my life.

You must have a golden heart ,hands and head to bring forth Golden things :physical or abstract.

Babacele:


You must have a golden heart ,hands and head to bring forth Golden things :physical or abstract.

Thank you.Are you the one that helped me to edit it very well like this?

selfwife:
Thank you.Are you the one that helped me to edit it very well like this?

Thanks ma. Nope, someone else might have.....