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The Man Below: A Poem by Aloofaa(m): 7:45pm On May 16, 2007
The Man Below


I remember that day
When you aborted my sleep
with your philtred scent

First to wake was the man below
whose startling alertness
could cause riotous ripples in a sea of bathing maids

The man above, beholding
the lofty swaying hips,
the sensuous lips,
dashed after you like a beast at a flirting prey

these restless fingers are now bored
of cupping those frontal lobes
I'm even sick of those lusty lips

When will you shuck off
your iron pants ?
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by jesusfreak(f): 5:56pm On May 17, 2007
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by RuuDie(m): 10:57am On May 22, 2007
i know a whole lot of people don't yet dig what your poem is all about that's why it ain't been getting so much reviews.

but its so, so OUTRAGEOUS  grin  --- really dig your flow man; your imagination is top-notch & i particularly love this -- "philtred" -- great ingenuity, modify words 2 suit your needs! boy, was that ending shrouded in some funny mystery!

doff my hat for u man --- really do!
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by SMC(f): 6:27pm On May 22, 2007
RuuDie:

i know a whole lot of people don't yet dig what your poem is all about that's why it ain't been getting so much reviews.

but its so, so OUTRAGEOUS  grin  --- really dig your flow man; your imagination is top-notch & i particularly love this -- "philtred" -- great ingenuity, modify words 2 suit your needs! boy, was that ending shrouded in some funny mystery!

doff my hat for u man --- really do!

I'm sure almost everyone (if not even all) who read this poem understood it. It doesn't take a genius as the message is quite clear. Maybe they have not commented because it isn't their cup of tea.
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by iice(f): 2:51pm On May 23, 2007
SMC:

I'm sure almost everyone (if not even all) who read this poem understood it. It doesn't take a genius as the message is quite clear. Maybe they have not commented because it isn't their cup of tea.

Shebi oooo

@Poem erhhh cool grin
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by denex: 11:32pm On May 29, 2007
I think you're really fly man. Meanwhile, keep the man below in control.

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