Chapter one
he ran through the woods in terror of what chased him soon he slipped and fell headlong
EPISODE ONE
Jake stared at the figure of the lady in front she looked fierce but hot he thought in him suddenly she turned and SAID REMEMBER ME he gasped_______________FLASHBACK____________________after drinking himself to stupor jake walked alone his thought were fierce how can she?, how dare she?, how would she?.
one who see jake NOW would mistake him for a ritualist if not for his good looks.
a young lady probably in her early twenties sat unprobed about her environment sobbed quietly as jake passed by.
jake who was looking for who to unleash his anger on saw the girl suddenly lust came and he found himself tearing the girl clothes and rode till day break while shouting, wailing, how dare she, why, why now, why me oblivious that the girl had stopped moving nor biting his skin he checked her pulse and found none he ran off____________PRESENT___________
YOU! He gasped and he passed out.
EPISODE TWO HOW WAS IT

EPISODE 2
He woke up feeling dizzy and tired, wow it was a dream he mumbled, as if on a cue he saw a writing on the wall in blood AM HERE TO HAUNT YOU
you know that mini attack you get when you struggle to get down from a public bus then you put your hand in your pocket only not to feel your phone. That was what he felt at that moment a sharp pain went through temple he groaned loudly the noise which attracted his daugther mara, she watched him quietly as he madd frantic effort to hide the writing but to his daughter he was just playing with the wall she didn't see anything.
"dad what that" her innocent voice startled him as he turned his face swolen like it was ran over by a boeing plane dried tear and mucus filled his face, his body was bruised lost in the thought on how to keep it from his elder son he heard his wife scream in a flash he ran to her only for him to behold his wife bleeding with a knife stuck in her belly he saw her NORA
EPISODE 3
sorry it is short i use a java phone Ó

Nice one. Try using dialogue tags to make the reading better.
I started with a Blackberry phone. So, a Java phone should be no issue.

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I see you're gifted. You've got a wonderful story here.

You only need more description and dialogue tags.

More power to your elbow. Thanks for the mention. Please do mention me when you drop the next episode. I can't wait to know what happens next.

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Nice one. Try using dialogue tags to make the reading better.
I started with a Blackberry phone. So, a Java phone should be no issue.

thanks bro call of the wind the genesis made me

KimberlyWest:
I see you're gifted. You've got a wonderful story here.

You only need more description and dialogue tags.

More power to your elbow. Thanks for the mention. Please do mention me when you drop the next episode. I can't wait to know what happens next.

Wow kim the great is here ghost from the past is

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EPISODE THREE
Nora was the first girl he slept with it wasn't intentional though_________FLASHBACK________nora am coming to your house i guess i forgot my biology text book there jake chipped in as they walked in.
jake a boy 5 feets 12 inches tall was the mr perfect of ss2 gold good looks nice abs and well trimmed dentition, he sucessfully won the heart of nora when hd was in silver (science) class he had to leave despite his parent pleas for him to be in the form he likes, though he didn't like art class he had to go there for nora
___________PRESENT___________OKAY ó but hope my dad is not around he will chase you with his whip ó that man fit kill person she put in jokingly as they sighted her house from afar.
_________FAST FORWARD 55 MINS LATER___________
Am so sorry jake mumbled sadly as he watched nora frantic effort to clean the blood on the tilled floor jake couldn't dechipher how it happened. He was just joking when__________ then it happeNEd
EPISODE 4

Ann2012:
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i am highly WOW WOW WOW WOW Before i turn ambulance ANN DON DEY FOLLOW

Ann2012:
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i am highly WOW WOW WOW WOW Before i turn ambulance ANN DON DEY FOLLOW

Happy new year guys

CHAPTER 4
Just that day with nora a marine spirit influenced him spirit wifes raped him all night then he became addicted to porn.
________2years later_________
(after schl life)he Proceded towards nora house after that day saga they had been rather cold. He wanted to tell her that he is going to dublin to further his studies. As soon as he got there he recieved a hard glare from her but that didn't disturb him, he told her but she hissed and tried to walk away, he held her and dragged her to him in her struggle to free herself lust came in and rage set in as he remembered his demonic wet dreams he did the unthinkable.
__________7 MONTHS LATER_________
Nora staggered as she felt cramps her protuding belly didnt help matters as she reached her destination
________FLASHBACK________
HER parent were displeased with her when they found out she was pregnant all effort to explain were frutile as distant relatives coupled with nosy neigbhour who booed at her as she made her way to begin a wretched life___
chpt 5

HE cocked his gun stole a quick glance around and proceeded towards the main buildinG...
nora made it clear that she will deal with him ON THE DAY SHE KILLED HIS WIFE,barely two weeks later his daughter was kidnapped he had to join the russian defence academy now he is here for the bull...
phew,phew two shot flew past him in sucession, damm he muttered as he dived to a corner he fired 2 shots towards the direction the shots came from then there was calm then as though on a cue shots started flying as he engaged his attacker in a crossfire. As he ran out of bullets he heard a voice
"do you depend on arms
blood will flow but not now take and begone"
he shivered to the thought and the possibility of dying without his daughter then..... He saw her just as before with her golden hair coming towards him he then understood the last sentence of the voice she ran towards him then he saw a light and a horn SPLASH!!!.
She was gone killed by a truck he wailed loudly then bang!! he was shot!!.
THE OLD RUINS 2
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