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Emotional piece, will do better with more imagery in order to paint the heartfelt pain. Lastly, the last line should have the auxiliary verb "is" before the rhetoric.

N/b: I have a poem titled; "sheartbreaker" and I want to do something like a sequel to it but a duet. Can you collaborate with me. knet

Banjam32:
Emotional piece, will do better with more imagery in order to paint the heartfelt pain. Lastly, the last line should have the auxiliary verb "is" before the rhetoric.

N/b: I have a poem titled; "sheartbreaker" and I want to do something like a sequel to it but a duet. Can you collaborate with me. knet

not so good, just an amateur on poems, but you can message me 07080546989

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not so good, just an amateur on poems, but you can message me 07080546989[/quote

There's no pro nor amateur to poetry. After all, it simply is an expression of life in a condensed and elevated language. I will message u. Hope u're on whatsapp?

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yes... this is my whatapp no 07080546989