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Ultimate Cede by neloyah: 3:34pm On May 28, 2020
This is my second, and last poem ever.
What do you call a poem?
A poem is something I know nothing about.
A poem must be human I guess..
This is goodbye.
It must be forever?


I wonder why it's so difficult,
To dress my thoughts in attractive clothings.
Do I seek reassurance?
Or do I see you as a psychopath.
Who's trying to applaud my clear gibber,
Just to make me feel better.



The answer remains a stillbirth,
In a formerly pregnant realm.
A goodbye isn't sad, it's a blessing.
One you may never garner,
Because you're so scared to say ciao!

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Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 11:33pm On May 28, 2020
Please continue with your dank memes thread. I see my self in almost all of them. Thanks

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Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 12:01am On May 29, 2020
I wish i could comment on the memes.

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Re: Ultimate Cede by Aiyamrex(m): 4:12am On May 29, 2020
Imagine coming up with Espanol at the last line to spice up the pieces, only my memo knows how much inspiration this poem birth in me.

good work

the rhetoric aspect of the question aimed the pieces to the blues of paris tower. . .
keep it up

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Re: Ultimate Cede by neloyah: 8:12am On May 29, 2020
Aiyamrex:
Imagine coming up with Espanol at the last line to spice up the pieces, only my memo knows how much inspiration this poem birth in me.

good work

the rhetoric aspect of the question aimed the pieces to the blues of paris tower. . .
keep it up


I don't even know what to say!
But thanks I guess?

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Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 7:41pm On Jun 02, 2020
Neloyah i cant comment on your dank meme thread
Re: Ultimate Cede by neloyah: 9:03pm On Jun 02, 2020
Perfectdanny:
Neloyah i cant comment on your dank meme thread

That's because it's in a no comment section of nl.
You wanna say anything about it, you could do it here. smiley cheesy
Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 9:40pm On Jun 02, 2020
neloyah:


That's because it's in a no comment section of nl.
You wanna say anything about it, you could do it here. smiley cheesy

Thing is, i'd like an instant reaction to a meme and then i'd now go and start tracking this thread just to react.

It kills my vibe.
Re: Ultimate Cede by neloyah: 9:45pm On Jun 02, 2020
Perfectdanny:


Thing is, i'd like an instant reaction to a meme and then i'd now go and start tracking this thread just to react.

It kills my vibe.

Then you can react in real life lol.
So sorry about your vibe, may it rest in peace.
Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 9:48pm On Jun 02, 2020
neloyah:

Then you can react in real life lol. So sorry about your vibe, may it rest in peace.
React in real life? How'd i do that? My vibe replenishes instanta. Lol
Re: Ultimate Cede by neloyah: 9:51pm On Jun 02, 2020
Perfectdanny:


React in real life? How'd i do that? My vibe replenishes instanta. Lol
.



Lol.
Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 6:06am On Jun 03, 2020
neloyah:
.


Lol.
Whats funny?
Re: Ultimate Cede by neloyah: 10:03am On Jun 03, 2020
Perfectdanny:


Whats funny?

Your question.
Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 12:58pm On Jun 03, 2020
neloyah:


Your question.

Ok fine. Thats wasnt a question. I was telling you that i wanted to comment on yur thread.
Re: Ultimate Cede by neloyah: 5:30pm On Jun 04, 2020
Perfectdanny:


Ok fine. Thats wasnt a question. I was telling you that i wanted to comment on yur thread.

The question asking me about how to react in real life is what I meant.

The thread is placed in a no-comment section of nairaland, so it's impossible for you to comment on it. That's exactly what I explained earlier. Before I suggested an alternative which is reacting in real life.
Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 10:08pm On Jun 04, 2020
neloyah:


The question asking me about how to react in real life is what I meant.

The thread is placed in a no-comment section of nairaland, so it's impossible for you to comment on it. That's exactly what I explained earlier. Before I suggested an alternative which is reacting in real life.

but but how do i react in real life. Am a very 'alone' person.
Re: Ultimate Cede by neloyah: 9:46am On Jun 06, 2020
Perfectdanny:


but but how do i react in real life. Am a very 'alone' person.


I'll teach you.
Re: Ultimate Cede by Nobody: 2:55pm On Jun 06, 2020
neloyah:


I'll teach you.
ok tnx. Am waiting

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