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I Dreamt Of You by haladug(m): 7:51am On Feb 21, 2011 |
hello nairalanders! I wrote this poem for a girl am toasting, I need you guys to comment and positively critise. thank you. Last night I saw you in my sleep It excites like skiing down a steep Your eyes like Gemstone brightens the night I spontaneously felt like holding you tight I held ur hand in mine And admire ur palm and nails I asked if u luv me, wit a gaze Eloquently, u responded wit a YES! I instantly woke up with a sigh of relieve Praying it comes true or atleast repeat |
Re: I Dreamt Of You by enix2dmix: 4:43pm On Mar 19, 2011 |
dis is nice, she will luv it |
Re: I Dreamt Of You by Nekai(f): 10:54am On Apr 06, 2011 |
Nice! |
Re: I Dreamt Of You by DieBoard: 1:09am On Apr 15, 2011 |
Im abit of a dreamy guy and would make it more like the following. Last night I saw you in my sleep. Excites like skiing fast in the deep. Going so fast that my heart felt floating. As i feel when your quoting. Your eyes brightens the night, you are worth the fight. Holding you last night made me feel as a knight. Holding your hand, so softly, so tender. Something i will always remember. I admire your voice, even if you are screaming. Some people say it noise but it makes me dreaming. When you asked to go out, i replied with a shout. Now my neighbors are awake and know it was all fake. For me it was the best moment ever, |
Re: I Dreamt Of You by Deffwill(m): 5:04pm On May 02, 2011 |
Nice one bro! you should visit my blog and post something. May be checkout some of my stuff as well, '9ja Lyrics and poetry' http://deffwill..com |
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